I highly doubt you'll be updating this. But you should really re-read this and edit it. The beginning is fucked with parts from the later chapters in the beginning chapters. A lot of things don't connect. What's the point for them having a million names? It doesn't make sense. A lot of things are confusing and a lot of your points are not complete. Especially in the beginning with the kids. I almost stopped reading it. After the kids weren't in it anymore it start to make more sense. Just thought I'd let you know.

Oh my god Alan and Eric! I'm going to cry.

Is the Axel in this story the same as Axel from Kingdom Hearts? Is it?

You have no idea how much I love the scene when Ciel showed Rowina who's boss. XDDD

I wasn't sure about this story when I became confused because of the chapters but I'm glad I decided to read on! XD This is great! Please continue!

Please continue this story it's so good

I swear that Jones is based off of Demon!America. In fact,the resemblance scares me...

You based Jones off of Demon!America... Or accidentally did.

Awesome story hope u update soon! I want to know how cowls kids come out XD!

wow ciel is pregnant AWESOME , lets see what happends next , awesome work

Oh wow. I wonder how this is going to turn out. :D Please update soon

Plot twist
I sure wasn't expecting that. Unless you've spelled it out loud and clear in which are I'm not too sure where I've been then.
Definitely looking forward to more

I'm sooooo exciteeeed! XD

Ha! I knew Ciel was pregnant! :)
I hope no one tries to steal the baby though.(someones probably going to anyway)
Anyway great chapter :) were gonna go back up to the surface! Yay! Please update soon :)

Please update asap i love this story! 3