A very devious Jareth. This Jareth seems to be quite a hard character. Sarah might be in for harsh treatment.

Loved it!

He tricked her good. All for foodstuff(s). I have read this story before, but never got to review on it. Still my favorite.

Seriously? You're ending it right there? Oh please oh please write more!

Score for the goblin king he'd make a good lawyer! Nice job please continue

This was very well written. I only wished it was longer! lol

I would really enjoy it if there was a follow up story or something similar, but in any case this was an amazing one shot. :)

No! No! No! You can't stop there! Oh, the torture! It's rare to find not only a yummy plot idea but the aforementioned so well written!

One suggestion - and it's really not that big of a criticism - when you write Sarah as being take to her dreams, it would be nice to see a transition symbol or letter or such to show that the setting has shifted. I was a tad confused at first and had to reread the part where she fell asleep - I wasn't sure whether it was a part of reality or a dream. But maybe that was your aim...ah well. Either way, I hope to enjoy more of your story soon :)

L'Archange

Bad, bad, bad Goblin king!

but very good

Oh please please please please continue this story! I hope the plot-bunny strikes again soon! Haha

pretty good. i like the sneaky stuff. just don't let it get too lovey dovey. i like my jareth as a conniving bastard.

so...what's gonna happen when she inevitably gets pregnant*since I doubt she'll be on the pill and contraceptive isn't exactly "foodstuff"*?

will the kids go with her aboveground, or will the kids be stuck underground and she'll have to decide to stay with her kids, or since she's likely to give birth aboveground will they stay with her family there while she goes underground?

she'd probably try for the latter one since Jareth's already screwed with her so much.

any chance you'll continue this?

I love the one-shot! Amazing!

~Xela