| Reviews for First Daughter |
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   LilyJean630 chapter 12 . 4/29 Was loving this story... so sad to see it’s not finished! |
| F Maurice chapter 11 . 10/31/2011 Well, Georgie, I hope things get back on track for you soon. I eagerly await your updates and the next chapter on Ron and Hermione's first official date. :) |
| HeRonLove chapter 11 . 10/31/2011 Ok, this fic is worth the wait and so is your writing. |
| tcubejd chapter 11 . 10/31/2011 Out of curiosity, what party is Mr. Granger a part of? Is he a Conservative or (New)Labour? Is he even perhaps a LD? I can't see him actually a Conservative member, it just doesn't fit with the progressive way Hermione thinks (or at least did in the books). Hope you find your time to help push your muse along and update this story... |
| arabellagrace chapter 11 . 10/31/2011 Yay |
| regbride12 chapter 11 . 10/31/2011 Heart stopped when I saw the title appear but had a feeling it was an A/N update ;) not going anywhere! :) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/21/2011 Hi:)did you know you have used my mobile number as the contact number for Hermione.I have a website selling cherished mobile numbers, and you have used my contact number. Never mind no problem:) .com |
| F Maurice chapter 6 . 9/14/2011 I liked it. May I point out one thing to watch for? "You brought her up here for drinks, and you were talking about you're lives …" The "you're" shown above should be written as "your". You're is used in place of "you are". I also see a few spelling errors but it's not enough to take me out of the story mode. Keep it up. |
| F Maurice chapter 10 . 9/14/2011 I really liked this chapter. I agree with you - Hermione couldn't have had that conversation about the dress with her mother since it was established in the first chapters that Hermione and her parents (especially her mother) don't have that strong bonding although it's plain that they love her. I really do hope her friend Lacey will be able to escape as herself. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| F Maurice chapter 9 . 9/14/2011 Ah! You're certainly building the tension here. You're right in that stories are rarely told from the Grangers point of view. And I loved the Deathly Hallows movie. I've seen it four times at the theatre and I'll be eagerly awaiting its release on BluRay. |
| F Maurice chapter 8 . 9/14/2011 Interesting. I found the story of Cupid and Psyche very fitting for this chapter - I never knew the whole story of Cupid until now. |
| F Maurice chapter 7 . 9/14/2011 I just realized I didn't leave reviews last night for chapters 4 through 7. I like that you bring up facts occasionally from events happening earlier (in the books and movies) such as Ron getting poisoned in sixth year. I'm curious as to what will happen next. |
| F Maurice chapter 2 . 9/13/2011 Good. |
| F Maurice chapter 1 . 9/13/2011 Interesting. I don't normally read the AU stories but your summary caught my eye. I'd like to see where you're going with this. |
| Britts122 chapter 10 . 9/11/2011 Okay, so i just read the whole thing, (so far), chapters 1-10... and... AMAZING! I had first seen the summary of this story and thought, oh, I would never like a story like that. But after a nice review I heard about, I thought I'd give it a shot, and WOW! What a great plot and WAY TO KEEP UP THE SUSPENSE! You truly have a talent for writing! Keep up the good work! Also... UPDATE SOON! |
