| Reviews for Renegade |
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  NS chapter 43 . 1/12/2018 Wow. Finished chapter 43... and this story has turned out so much better than I thought it was going to after the first couple chapters. You completely dove into this, and the story really became enchanting. It’s a brilliant story and so well told. There are a few little things I would suggest changing- like the somewhat overuse of alternative descriptors of characters. Most of the time it is better to just say he/she, or the characters names rather than over using the creative descriptions such as “the onyx-haired teen boy”... we know who you’re talkinf about in the scene, promise. Once in a while is great, but not too much. Anyways, I digress. I was addicted to this story, literally. I did practically NOTHING with my life until I finished reading every chapter that you’ve shared. I love it, it’s so gritty and dramatic and yet has these tender moments and such accurate depictions of being young and in love. I’m heaerbroken to see that it’s been 4 years since you’ve updated this story, and I imagine that it’s been abandoned. I really do hope that you are well, and still writing and that you will perhaps come back to this fantastic story. |
| NS chapter 8 . 1/11/2018 Awww, chapter 8 was so sweet! Man this story is RICH with drama, I love it! Can’t wait to read more. This story has consumed me. Yes, my whole day is shot because all I want to do is keep reading. Thank you! |
| NS chapter 2 . 1/11/2018 Oooo, chapter two is much grittier... this is good! |
| NS chapter 1 . 1/11/2018 Just finished chapter 1, and there’s definitely potential! I have to say something though- if Inuyasha is supposed to be the “school badass” (which as an unofficial badboy title made me laugh out loud) he needs to rethink his wardrobe. No one looks badass in a bandana. Ever. XD The double piercings don’t help either. Anyways, looking forward to reading more! |
 Jemzet A Heart Broken Angel chapter 43 . 3/23/2017 this is a great story hope you update soon! |
| daidai chapter 1 . 9/24/2016 I love ur story! I hope to here more about it soon. I'd like to know what happens. |
| ThatGurlWrites07 chapter 43 . 7/28/2016 Please update soon, this is so good! |
| SAgotogether chapter 20 . 5/21/2016 Please update! |
| magicalangel chapter 43 . 4/5/2016 I am in love with this story! OMG! Can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| Kagz2 Higur1 chapter 37 . 2/26/2016 Naraku?You Sadistic MotherFucker!##!:;:# |
| Kagz2 Higur1 chapter 34 . 2/26/2016 _ |
| Kagz2 Higur1 chapter 22 . 2/26/2016 (wistful sigh) so romantic |
| Kagz2 Higur1 chapter 19 . 2/26/2016 Naraku... |
| Kagz2 Higur1 chapter 17 . 2/26/2016 *face Palm* Stalker Mom... |
| Guest chapter 43 . 2/17/2016 finish the story! |
