This is a good idea, and it is written pretty well! You just need to work on correct grammar a little bit. Grammarly helps with that. You don’t need the full subscription, just the basic and you should be good. Other than that it is good! And just keep writing, try to write a little bit each day so you keep improving and getting better. It takes time!

me like the story

Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea

Your story is so AMAZING! I LOVE IT! I know it has been awhile since you updated but I hope you continue this story!

this is so cool! I know it has been a while but I hope you update your story soon!

Lol xD

Can't say I enjoyed it too thoroughly. Tony wasn't Tony, if anything he seemed a weaker personality than what I am used to. Plus, the lack of proper capitalization was starting to kill me (in almost a literal sense after a while). There are some issues with this story, but the main structure of the story is sound. it is just the personalities that need some adjusting, is all.

For the love of Pete, please capitalize the D in Dean's name, you're doing it for everyone else, why not him?

oooo burn by a old dude too

Loved the story you were writing here. I hope that there is more and if there is just keep up the good work.

Serenity

please update

I thought this could be interesting... unfortunately there were so many spelling errors that I couldn't finish it. You really just need to go through this and edit it.

Great story!

Please update soon! :)

Awesome story. I can't wait for more. I love hurt!Tony with his protective older brothers. I hope you continue the story.

Those last two chapters were great. Keep up he good work with Tony on he rode to recovery.