that is good. update soon please.

It made no sense that Ichigo couldn't get into the ministry of magic when he had been able to get in the magic hospital and even Dumbledore office with his own abilities. It seems ridiculous that he was trying to use the magical way to enter but was locked out...?

Dying before getting a chance to graduate... That must be annoying...

You should put a divider between the scene with Urahara and the one with Ichigo - it's confusing otherwise (just sayin')
Is Flinch actally gonna like Ichigo at all? They're so different

"You could never be sure" instead of 'never could be sure'
'device', not 'devise'
'of Britain', not 'the' Britain. Countries usually don't take 'the', unless it's like, 'the Republic of' or 'the United States of'

'Sirius patted his own head' Hahah XD
I wonder why Soul Reapers are concerned about Voldemort?

A lot of 'a' articles are missing here and there. Maybe a solution would be getting a spelling and grammar checker (like Grammarly or something) so you can stay lazy all you want
"DO they exist for real", not 'does' (that's only for third person singular) (near the end of chap)
"Leave us any OPTIONS", not 'opinions'
"Don't trust even your closest friends" (just an extra word. I would advise taking 'to' out)

Heh. Ichigo running on air. Gotta love that n_n

"Zangetsu is pissed off" rather tahn "Zangetsu pissed off is" (in Shiro's speech)
Same: "What were those things" rather than "What those things were" (Ichigo says this)
'Fotioned'? You mean 'motioned', probably (typo, near the end of the chapt)

Here comes the explaining! I wonder how it's gonna go

Heh. Vernon totally hates anything that goes out of the norm, so I'm pretty sure he'd HATE to have Isshin around... Although Ichigio's not much better... n_n;

I always found hilarious that Ichigo's hair is said to be 'orange'. It's not ginger, it's ORANGE. So I guess it's no wonder even HP characters so often find it odd... XD

It's a shame that this sudden urge to draw the twins as 40-y-o women can only last for a few minutes... i wish it'd last longer so that I'd actually get back to drawing

Daniel Marsh. Nice to meet you. Heh, I like him already

Oooh I like that uniform too

Why do I get the feeling Ichigo is gonna start hating them pretty quickly?

hah 69k words

Great job it's really good

THIS IS AWESOME AND IT'S 3:16am I should sleep

Nice job

Gargantua is what hollows use. Shinigami use the sekaimon (not the right spelling).

Last conversation was full of grammar mistakes. You've probably abandoned this, but you desperately need a beta. I mean, this story does have potential and grammar isn't exactly my strong point either, but you overuse caps lock and the simple mistakes actually distract from the story.

How many laws did ichigo break in this chapter he's lucky he is a hero because I swear to god most people would be put to death for this