Tooooo hard to read. Far too hard. Makes it really annoyin. While you’ve put harry's struggle after triwizard more convincing way than most, this story suck in a lot of other ways.

This sucks ass!

This was highly enjoyable! I realize it is likely abandoned at this point, but I wanted to let you know that I have spent two weeks reading this throughout each of my 30 minute lunch breaks at work. I don't really expect continuation, but I'll follow just in case. I do want to know exactly what's up with the shrinking though.

The "Happy Reading!" is particularly ironic, seeing as the huge, unbroken paragraphs made this chapter so difficult to actually read.

Amazing

why do you have to make Harry cuss? instantly stopped reading

This chapter basically totally destroyed your story. Harry is now well out of character, even for this story. Of course, the Voldemort viewings might have eventually driven him to such things, if no one helped, however, there is no reason to believe that the Dumbledore in this story would fail to do something, quite a bit sooner than this... Then again, even if one successfully took the time to make Harry's transition plausible, then it still wouldn't be a Harry Potter story, as the final result would be alien to his core character.

I love you story and at the unlikely chance u look at this message PLEaSe write more your very good or u could have died in an accident by now -_- oh well thanks and bye

shit

LOVE IT

Reading this story for the first time, I was absolutely appalled by this segment:

"Fuck yourself Draco, but then again a twisted fag like you may actually enjoy it." Harry somehow, contained his anger, well, for the present moment of course. Draco took a long while to respond. His face turning almost as red as the Weasleys' hair. Because of the lack of response, even Crabbe and Goyle were looking at Draco questioningly.

I believe you could have found a better way to offend Draco, or at least done so without using the phrase 'twisted fag'. Perhaps you meant to make Harry a bigoted, insensitive teenager. I don't know. But I personally found this offensive and more of a reflection of the author's mindset rather than the character speaking. I just wanted you to know, this was very insulting, and before you start calling me a fag too, I never said anything about my sexual orientation. I'm pointing out that it's offensive in general for someone to use such language in literature without doing so responsibly.

Frankly, I bet you don't care, and probably do think homosexuality is twisted and worthy of insult. -sigh-

this is a really well written fic. the emotions from harry are astonishingly realistic and the plot flows great. such a shame you've not updated it in years! perhaps you can get back into it?

I got somm'att ter say teh ya. Its not going ter be thats this story is crap though. Yer might consider placing an A/N at the end of yer cahppies before yeh start explaining in yer own words an' not in the words of the story. A few -HP- or somm'att between sections cause I know that FF don't like lines. It'll just take some of the guesswork outta readin', that's all. Can't say where I want this ter go, as yer writin' it, or maybe even have finished writin' it.

Good story, rather dark and the last few chapters hard to read with very long paragraphs but good reading none the less. Thanks for sharing!

Poor Harry! Now the 10 galleons you brought on yourself. lol The Ferret thing I consider self-defense. The Azkaban? Well that's the breaks.