MORE PLEASE :D

oh please please update. Please please

But just so you know, when you wrote something about two kids you shouldnt use 2, youd rather use letters, for numbers up to twelve. And I think its Schuester not Schuster

Honestly this is an amazing story and I really wish you would update because this stiry is very intriging and you really make me want to keep reading every word and rereading them as I have done for the 8th time today. Thank you

Oh, oh oh please continue! I'm dying for the rest. Promise I will review every new chapter

Kindest Regards

ER

Oh no! I'm so worried for Rachel. I hope Will can help her through everything. This was a great chapter and I can't wait for more.

I love this. I like that you are taking time to develop everything and I like the darker, angsty turn this is taking. I'm very interested to see what Will does and how he may be able to Rachel. This is seriously a great start and I'm very much looking forward to more.

Wow I definitely wasnt expecting that! Oh no! Poor Rachel :( I hope Will can help her before she does anything to herself! Good chapter, now bring on the angst :)

I'm really liking this so far!

I know it's a little taboo but I really love the Shuberry ship, I just wish there were more fics about it out there

I liked it.(:
Short, sweet and to the point.
Please, please continue!(:

I'm really interested to learn what's wrong with Rachel. Something is definitely going on and I hope Will figures it out and is there to help her. :)

Thanks for the update. I hope we get more soon!

this was good..can't wait to see what else you have planned! Also maybe try to make your chapters a little longer, but other than that you are doing a wonderful job :)

this makes him sound like a pervert in some way, like she was wearing all white or something like that. Just saying...

I am very much intrigued by this and I look forward to reading more. I'm so glad to see another Will/Rachel fic and this was a very good start.

Yay another Will/Rachel fic! Interesting start to the story, I'm really intrigued to see what you have planned for the rest of it. I hope you update soon :)