Reviews for Bitter
sagey chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
ahhh poor John..and so true to character...and love team fics even if we dont gt J/T smoochies...lol...

loe them all there for him..and rodney is just too funny..

great stuff

hugs
Begoogled chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Thank you for this beautiful insight into John's mind. He has a way of getting into trouble, but it's good to see that his friends are there to support him. Words are almost unnecessary between them. And that scene where he had to leave Elizabeth is quite gripping. Makes for great fanfics! Thanks!
immertreu chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I still miss Elizabeth... And of course Sheppard would beat himself up over it and punish himself every way he could.

Thanks for sharing!
Titan5 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
You have such a way of getting in John's head - I love it. I always thought he'd harbor a huge amount of guilt and a terrible sense of loss over Elizabeth, a lot more than they showed on the show. Glad to see you tapping into that. And of course I love the h/c!
hifield chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Really really enjoyed this. Nice to read something the show mistakenly never showed.

Excellent.
SyfyFan chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Great story. Nice emo whump and of cos the team support. Hopefully will be able to read more from you.
mathgirl24 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
That was wonderful! The show moved on from the events in Lifeline far too quickly. This was really great. I can totally picture John just wanting to get away, but of course trouble follows him everywhere.
Stealth Dragon chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
That was excellent :D
Zanshe chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Nice
Sharpe's Hussy chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Tenacity at times can be foolhardy...and pay back can be vicious
gw-libero chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Loved the story - thanks for sharing!
TheNaggingCube chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Oh John... great rescue.
Jedi40 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Great mix of body and emo whump for John to deal with. Nice touch with the team at the end.
pisces317 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Very good answer to the prompt! You're such good writer. :)
jasminesmommy chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
hmmm i wonder why poor john cant do anything without getting injured in some way or other :)
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