I wish the Yule ball would have went like that. That was a great fic.

If it makes you feel any better, I found fewer mistakes in your story than I usually do in my own. :)

I like this!

However, I can't see crookshanks allowing Ron to train him.

loved it !

So cute! Love this!

I love the she who must be reviewed bit. And its really super good even if you are dyslexic!

I liked it! Very nice and I didn't mind the grammar or the spelling :)