This is absolutely adorable! I love it so much! It's rekindled my old love for Narnia. :) And Jess on a trip with Marshwiggles! I wish we had seen her in a bit of a longer argument, perky Jess versus two of them! That would've been so fun to read.
So glad to see how much Becker really does love Jess, even if he never really showed it in Primeval. No mention of Emily, though, which made me kind of sad! It might've been nice to see her comfort Becker in a small way, but I can understand where it wouldn't quite fit. All in all, great job! I enjoyed it so much!

Don't leave it there! Ooh, please update as soon as you can. But, Yay! They found her :D Becker can stop feeling guilty now... (who am I kidding, Becker ALWAYS feels guilty!). Can't wait to see the others reactions!

Please, please, please update as quickly as you can! I can't wait to see Becker's reaction to Jess' return! Fantastic story, can't wait for the next chapter. :D

This is an interesting story. It is different and I enjoy it. Please keep going. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

wow this is good! please update soon, i'm hooked!

Well done, this is really different! Keep on going.