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Guest chapter 17 . 12/23/2014 OMG that was intense! Thank you for an awesome story! :) |
Xenial chapter 17 . 4/16/2013 Oh... My... Glob... THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT WOULD HAPPEN! I LOVE IT! |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/4/2013 That has to be one of the best endings ever. ! |
best fic chapter 17 . 2/18/2013 holy crap i cloud imagine the IZ theme playing afer the final word of this fic |
Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 17 . 2/13/2013 Well written, and nicely dark, although a few things were left hanging. How did Zim triumph over Tak and become Tallest? What position does Gaz hold that she has direct contact with Zim whenever she wants? I like how you started and ended the story with 'The Truth'. As to a future fic, alas, I'm not all that interested in stories with mostly OCs... But write it if you want; I'm sure others will read it! ;) |
Night-Waker chapter 17 . 2/10/2013 You FINALLY updated?! O.o ...YES! My only problem is the ending feels very rushed and a bit anti-climatic. You should've had Zim at least feel a tad guilty for killing his enemy. But your fic, not mine so oh well. Regarding your new story idea, DO IT! One question though, are we supposed to send in our OCs or are you having them all be your own? |
SaintHeartwing chapter 17 . 2/10/2013 What the hell? That's how you end this? THIS? REALLY?! I have never seen SUCH a build-up that ended up with SUCH a disappointing, f-k you pay off that COMPLETELY invalidates ALL the struggle and effort that we just saw. There was NO arc to the character. Nothing came back to bite him in the ass. Not even GUILT. And the only LIKABLE character we actually DID want to see succeed you just killed off?! This is NOT how you do a story! |
xXyumpancakesXx chapter 16 . 6/13/2012 hi! so if you dont remember, you dared on my questionaire for everyone to read and review your story (which btw im verrrry sorry im so late xD) but yea, so heres the questionaires review, and as for my review, i think you did a super good job and you need to finish this! :) Zim: You! Author human! Deserve lots and lots of snacks! However, you are very inaccurate in information as I am and never have been a defect. Get your facts straight! Dib: How could you side with Zim? Don't you care anything about your planet? Dont just write fantasies of the Earth being destroyed! Gir: I like chocolate pudding! Gaz: It's okay. Red: HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO US? I ORDER YOU BE THROWN OUT THE AIRLOCK! Purple: Yea! I don't wanna die! Red: Also, I order you to change this story so Zim isn't the Tallest and he doesnt win! Lard Nar: The Resisty shall never lose! Tak: I like my character. Okay, hope you liked the review! and the next chapter should be posted any day now! sorry for the long wait! |
AllKnowingMay chapter 15 . 1/19/2012 Okay, Dib is captured and Zim is Tallest. Frankly I'm more interested in what happened to Zim in ch. 13 and how he became Tallest. Another thing I'm wondering about is Dib really going to die, because that would be sad. Please update soon. |
letmedeletemyaccountchallenge chapter 16 . 1/11/2012 RAWR! YEYUH! |
Lovegirl1 chapter 16 . 12/31/2011 Damn. I always knew Gaz would jump at the chance to destroy all of humanity. I should of started reading this earlier It's very good and even though a total ZaDr fan I really hoping to see one of those to win or die -_-; Come on DIB! I'm ruting for you :D |
Shadowdib chapter 15 . 12/31/2011 I always figured Gaz would side with the Armada. Update soon! |
EpicMickeyX chapter 15 . 12/30/2011 PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I like this new Zim! |
SaintHeartwing chapter 15 . 12/30/2011 Uh, yeah, I don't like it much either, because it's a let-down. This is it? Seriously? You're just letting Earth get taken over and Dib executed just because Zim has a lust for power and Gaz is a whining misanthrope? No big final climactic battle? Please tell me this isn't all there is to the story. |
CiCi The Awesome chapter 14 . 12/25/2011 I just read through this whole thing, and I have to say, I love it! Really awesome job! :) Can't wait for more. Happy holidays . |