I'm the same, mistake, I sent the review and not finished
a little thing Gale said that he shaped Katniss. Really? Seriously? Let's remember a thing: Gale didn't really joined Katniss until she taught him to shoot, and didn't he saw Katniss starving, why he didn't help, he could have brought her to the forest. And the possessiveness over her.
Wow, I think is a thing I like, you made a very well oneself centric character in this Gale.
But your Finnic is like the sad story of Disney children, but with the dark twist we know.
And Spanish as a forbidden language, so your D4 would be Mexico? That story in Spanish, were it comes?

Well written really, but ... I don't see Gale selling himself, really, but it's a possibility, still not convinced because he already hunted by himself and with Katniss and took tesseare (he got more)and his mother worked. As a thief, I see him without doubt more than a whore.
The Finnic/Gale comparation, well Finnic is a better actor (he hides very well the hatedidn't Gale got jealous because Katniss sought Finnic.

wow! this one shot story is so good! u doing amazing job! I would really love to see more one shot story about finnick and Annie~

wow

The last line is haunting. The first time I read it, I teared up because how beautifully this is written. This must be my fifth time and it just gets better. I love all your work and I wish you didn't prefer the other site because I can't find my way around it at all. But honestly, even all that you have left here, I love them.

beautifully written piece. I feel bad for Finnick. And Gale, wow he is just plowing fields left and right, it kind of pisses me off his sense of entitlement to Katniss.

All I can ever say is WOW

this is the most perfect thing i've ever read.

this is so amazing, especially the last line. it's so powerful and speaks for the two men

Whoa. That ending is incredible.

Wonderful story. :)

"And when she is reaped, it's wretched."
I almost thought, "Who's narrating?" And then I realized...
Wow. It's the two of them. Both of them. The intertwining in this fic just...takes my breath away.

OH MY FUCKING GOD WITH 9. I NOTICED THAT IT'S INTENDED FOR BOTH SITUATIONS AND WHAT THE HELL HOW DID YOU DO THAT YOU'RE SO BRILLIANT AND CLEVER AND I CANT EVEN OH MY GOD. I LITERALLY SCREAM "SHIT" ONCE I READ THAT LINE BECAUSE OH MY GOD YOU'RE SO FUCKING PERFECT.

Oh my god . This was fuckinng amazingamazing

This was utterly, hauntingly beautiful. Im tearing up right now.

You are such a gifted writer and I honestly cant think of adequate praise that would truly do your story justice. I love this closer look on gale and finnick, and it was masterfully written, making this one shot probably the best ive read in this fandom.

You are just so talented and I cant wait to look at your other work :)

-justlikewater