Reviews for A Thorn in Time
sasunaru13 chapter 24 . 10/31/2015
.God like...wow, this story is very complex like. Wow. Youre a genius I swear. This is even more complex than standing at the edge of tomorrow I think. So many tangled aspects and Im amazed just how you can plan that far ahead honestly.
One thing that makes me sad is how murdering soviet is the key to kill Stalin, but I'm hoping in this last time loop Soviet wont be killed and maybe just kept in Alfred and Ivans world with Jones until Stalin dead there without being able to eat Soviets heart. Yeah that seems to be the easiest solution no? Or so I tought, hehe.. Hell he maybe will eat other nations heart, but Im assuming the only heart that will make him immortal is Soviet's just to make things easier. Haha.
Anyway like whew. This story really turns gears in my brains. Very exciting to read like a really long riddles! Which can be solved easily if only Ivan had asked Alfreds help from the first time. Hahaha
sasunaru13 chapter 23 . 10/31/2015
Whattt why why why alfreddd
sasunaru13 chapter 22 . 10/31/2015
Fcukkkkk i tought this will be the last loop..
And btw im so curious about Jones secret plan with Alfred. What is he trying to achieve by sleeping with Alfred? And what about his first choice of the secret plan? Wow you never cease to amaze me with your plot twists haha
sasunaru13 chapter 21 . 10/31/2015
ohmg, I know soviet jones rels is fucked up, but this chapter just adds the fucked-upness by 1 million times. i love it though, so complex and possessive. yes.
sasunaru13 chapter 20 . 10/31/2015
But but will there be rusame smut too? *puppy eyes*
sasunaru13 chapter 19 . 10/30/2015
tough questions...though with ivan now more powerful i can see him topping better
sasunaru13 chapter 18 . 10/30/2015
Buttt there will still be ivan x alfred righttt
sasunaru13 chapter 17 . 10/30/2015
Tbh im not really a selfcest fan, but you make me fell in love with SovietxRussia like, wow...that is so sexyyy
sasunaru13 chapter 16 . 10/30/2015
Oh no...pls dont say Ivan is turning evil after heart switching with Soviet..
sasunaru13 chapter 15 . 10/29/2015
A peck and al died againnnn? Nooooo
sasunaru13 chapter 14 . 10/29/2015
Wowwwww interesting
sasunaru13 chapter 13 . 10/29/2015
Whattttt died again alfredd?
sasunaru13 chapter 12 . 10/28/2015
Whatttt now gilbertt?
sasunaru13 chapter 11 . 10/28/2015
Al noooooo
sasunaru13 chapter 10 . 10/28/2015
Gogogogogooo
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