Bookstore, and Bookstore 2 These stories are a typical amateurish mess. It is one long run on sentence with no descriptions, and no discernable writing style. The OC's have no real purpose, and their existence is never resolved. All of the original characters are OOC. The cases are not well thought through. Overall this is a lazy, conglomeration of loose ends. It stands as a perfect example of what Not to do if one is an aspiring writer.

I can't find the sequel for sentinel

LOVELY!

Aw, it's over?! I really, really loved this story! I'm kinda sad it's over, but I'm also really glad that everything worked out okay! :) I hope Gene'll be able to get over Mai. But...what happened to Ari...?

Finally, Naru! Hehe! Now go win Mai back!

When will Naru is going to wake up?

Let Naru suffer for a little while. . He deserves it!

cracks her knuckles* I feel like there is an angry mob ready to come after Naru. He better snap out of it soon. But anyways, I love your writing style.

No, no, no! Aww Naru why you gotta be way?! Mai explained everything but yet you still dont do anything?! And poor Mai, she lost the babies...*sigh* Well I guess I can only hope everything turns out in the end!

Please update soon! :)

Are you crazy Mai?! You're not supposed to go on some date, you're with Naru! Stay with him! And...is Mai pregnant? I thought her and Naru hadnt 'done it' yet lol. If so, Mai you better tell Naru! He's the father he deserves to know and he'll know sooner and later anyways. He already noticed you're gaining weight. And when did Mai find out? Ah so many questions I want answered lol.

OH! And why Ari keeps blushing about Mai and everything...it probably has something to do with her replacing Naru as Gene's twin or something...

I absolutely love this story! It's amazing! Please update really soon! :)

you need to update this. it has just gotten interesting

What the heck? 1st Naru is her BF (and I'm pretty sure that Mai is prego with his kid), then Gene tries to steal Mai away from Noll, then Ari get's a crush on Mia, and now some random guy is after her? Please make it so that she comes to her senses and doesn't go the date and that she tell Naru what's up with her sickness. I mean I love drama, but anything out side of the twin (slightly including Ari) fighting over Mai is too much. Also, Ari said that she has no memories, so how does she remember the fact that Gene and her mother gave her that necklace, and the fact that they had a goldfish that dided in Gene's care. Plus, how does she have Naru's childhood momories? Is she the female NAru that got pulled from some alternated demention, or was created by Gene in the spiritual plain because he needed his twin, or maybe she was born in the spiritual plain and she and Naru have the same soul, and it just split in half after Naru went to berry Gene since it was like berrying a part of himself? I really hope you update soon, because I just need to find out exactly what Ari is and why Gene is back. In the last story you wrote that he already knew why he was back, but didn't want to tell Ari. Please, I'm begging, please post a new chapter soon. I'm litteraly dieing to find out.

so cute... can't wait what will happen next!

What is wrong with Mai? Is like she had a sudden transformation. Ttly OCC

I love how it's going!

i really like this story