J'aime beaucoup j'adore je suis un fan de ainsi que shizune et si on regarde beaucoup cela aurait pu du arrivé et je pense que c'est vrai que Naruto soit depuis longtemps l'homme de Tsunade mais elle ne peut réellement ne pas donner naissance ?

C'est bizarre mais Tsunade pense de Naruto comme son frère alors que cela aurait plus approprié fils.

fun

You beautilful man-or women- what a beautiful fic pleae add more

I really enjoyed this, there are not nearly enough Naruto x Tsunade or Naruto x Shizune stories out there.

Good use of descriptions where needed, there are a few parts that sound like you missed a word or two but otherwise nicely done.

excellent story, CONGRATULATIONS

is there a chater 2

Cool one this!

Wow just F**ing wow
I liked the story, no that is an understatement I flipping love the story
I don't see much of Naruto x Shizune and it makes me mad sometimes but I was lucky to be able to read this.

Sweet

Very nice ;) I really liked this one. Though when Shizune ends up pregnant people might wonder. I hope you write more for this coupling sometime in the future, maybe with more interaction with all three of them at the same time during some fun.

To be fair...he IS family, though distant cousins would be more correct. We just don't know how distant it is untill we see an Uzumaki family tree. Good shit by the way. loved it.

*Applause* Well done, very well done. You are an excellent writer with a brilliant mind.

thisones beter than the last one i read

a very nice surprise indeed!

whooaa