OMG LOVE THISSSSSSS
i read thoroughly over every WORDS
i really like the style

My feelings for this fic are hard to put into words. As i mentioned before your writing style leaves a fresh feeling. So descriptive, so much so that i can clearly see the scenes and images as if I was a witness. Yet, your descriptions are not heavy nor cause the reader to get lost or destracted with all the words. The relationship bwt Naruto and Sasuke and how you tell the story makes me long to read the next chapter while at the same time want to stop reading because I was afraid to know what would happen. Naruto would make me so angry with his limitations and how that translated into his treating Sasuke. Will for sure read this again and so look foward to your other stories. Thank you so much for sharing. Xo

WHAT THE HELL...just happened?

OMFricken GOD! So descriptive and so well written. Your writing style is so refreshing! I am loving this fic. Cannot put it down.

Wow

holy shit

there's only one thing I have to say after finishing your story. I have read very few Fanfictions books see movies that have moved me captured my attention and if kept me wanting to do nothing but read them all day and yours is one of them the story was beautifully written the detail was amazing I could actually see the scenes there were plenty of times where I laugh and I really wanted to cry towards the end when Naruto actually broke it off. I love the maturity the tragedy and everything about the store it was just truly amazing and I can't wait to read more of your work please keep writing I love it there's been great reviews and everything about this was just beautifully written thank you for sharing your talent with our world and our community

To be honest, I didn't think I'd like this story because 1. The age difference between Sasuke and Naruto and 2. Because Sasuke was a complete brat. But, as the story progressed I became entranced by it. I loved how you gradually introduced the other characters from the original story instead of giving them major parts early on. AND TSUNADE'S DEATH! I had to re-read that part of the chapter so many times because I kept tearing up and couldn't finish it. This was very well done and I plan to read more of your writing -SxS

I really like this so far!

...WOW. This story... just WOW. My only regret is that I didn't come across this sooner. I will be rereading this. I don't think I've read a story where Naruto was so dark and messed up (for good reason) and Sasuke was in so much need of growing up. The character developments, plot, intensity, and self discovery within this story was absolutely amazing. Bravo!

One of the best story I read here !

This story . . . I have no words. You're able to capture such intense emotion; I'm blown away.
Did I mention this is at least the 5th time I've read this story? I'm sure I've commented before, but everytime I read it I have to tell you that this story was incredible. I, in all seriousness, am always so touched when I read this story. It has actually changed me for the better.
The characters are written amazingly, the plot was fantastic and not JUST focused on Sasuke and Naruto, not to mention that the concept is so unique and creative.
This story changed my life. It seriously makes me reconsider my relationships with others. Not to mention I just fell in love with all of the charcters.
I guess my only complaint (which is really minor) would be that the bad guys were very stereotypical. We didn't see much of them besides their evil lair and the whole "MUAH HA HA I am evil!". But that was a pretty minor thing that didn't deter from the story.

Can I also mention that I really enjoy your passion for SasuNaru/NaruSasu? One of the reasons I love these fics is because I get to see the same two characters I adore fall inlove over and over and over again. I feel you captured that essence absurdly well. Just another reason this fic holds a special place in my heart.

I'm not sure if you still read these, but let me tell you,
Since I have found this story,
I knew and know until today and for the future,
that I am going to continue re-reading it. It is that fucking amazing.

Thank you for writing this.

To be honest, after what I just read, I don't feel like reading anymore... I'll probably read anyway but just because I don't like not finishing what I start. I know they'll probably be together after those 5 years and they'll be more "mature" and "ready to have a relationship" and be happy and bla bla bla but ugh this "mature"/"right" thing to do just... seems really stupid to me, really. Like you're lecturing people "and this is what you have to do" and even if it is, it seems forced and just... meh... Also, the sex is waaay too much ._. I kinda liked your story but I feel itcould have been better.

HAHAHAHA, omg Sasuke's slow seduction with Ramen is a freaking stroke of genius!

This chpt's end made me cry, when sas say you were suppose to be my hero oh my god