This

should

Be

Expanded

that was dope

She says the media comes up with creative names,..but it's obviously going to be "Hit-Mom"

Nice! I liked this chapter

this is adorable, i want more of this verse

This was a fun read. I like the concept of is a great deal.

that was awesome!

Cute

Awesome. And cute & adorable with the family love. Well kind've cute, because as awesome as the three characters are, a scene taking the p*** out of Dave makes it even better ;P

good story

Now this is a gem to behold, I can imagine this scene roll out. Amazing snapshot of a possible future, thanks for a great read.

Hit Girl MK2! After reading Holiday Bonus, the description of this short began to make sense when I decided to read it today, when originally I had absolutely no idea what it meant. I'm glad I read it now!
The superhero family to fear! For her first time she didn't do too bad. Well yeah she got shot, but she had all her gear on, so it's only bruises, not bullet holes. Dave knocking the guy on his ass in one hit! Haha! And Mindy finishing him off with a cheap nut shot, haha!
Dave does take the trophy for "failing epically" when he started out, haha! But then again he wasn't as prepared as Mindy was, and now Kimberly. But look at him now.
Getting to eat at the diner, it's official then. Kimberly is a new super, Hit Girl mark 2!
Ah man we still don't get Mindy's new name!
Such a fun read!

Interesting. But I surely hope Dave and Mindy's children would never have (or want) to become vigilantes. Do we really need another messed-up kid? Or worse, a kid who thinks fighting criminals is a game like in this story

Do not pay any mind to my moaning though. I know it's just a funny story about future Dave/Mindy family

This... THIS NEEDS TO BE A SERIES.

love it XD