I love this story so much! 3 Severus and Harry finally finding peace with each other and the slow build up was brilliant! Not rushed, but also not dragged out too much, just how I like it. And I thought both were still quite well in character. The only thing that bothered me a bit was that you used Daniel Radcliff's physics in this story and not the canon Harry's (who is James' height and James is described as tall, so harry should be at least as tall as Severus). But that is just a very personal thing of mine xD I still loved this story a lot! :D

Wonderful story. So nicely thought out and steady in its building towards the conclusion. I liked all of the uncertainty and misheard words, and I like that Severus and Harry had to work towards this. In the end, the way that they discovered they were meant to be together was lovely, and I think I melted a bit to read it. Thanks for writing a thoroughly enjoyable tale.

Beautiful! What a great story!

That was amazing. You captured Severus perfectly. I loved every word of this. Thank you so much for writing this.

And then you went and fixed everything perfctly! Lovely! Great story!

Aw, this is so sad! Silly Sev..

Wow, how something can be so hot, romantic and at the same time so tragic is difficult to understand.. Beautifully written!

Oh Severus, why let your issues get in the way like this?! He has got some making up to do, hopefully of a smexy, fluffy nature.. AMAZING chapter!

This was heartbreaking, so gorgeous! And Harry's "I know I would" aww..

This is so beautiful! I love it!

Aw, this is just gut-wrenching! So lovely!

What an amazing realization! And the getting there was so sweet and very hot!

What an adorable, ingenious idea! And the writing is just spectacular!

Aw, lovely, lovely Harry! What a sweet chapter!

Aw! "He wants you not to hate him", that gave him something to think about! Great chapter!