Reviews for Breaking Speed
CreepInsane chapter 9 . 8/28/2019
Nooooo! please you gotta update this thing! it rock! I love it so so much. please update, I'm begging you you.
Sasquatch chapter 9 . 8/10/2019
pls write more its awesome
Xxl Artemis West lxX chapter 9 . 8/15/2018
Plz continue this story!
Felix Runck chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
Hello my name is Felix Runck and I'm from Germany, I really like this fanfanfiton, but it has not been updated for 4 years, would be nice if it continues, poor Wally
Mister X chapter 9 . 2/3/2018
Good Day I wanted to ask when this story will be updated, it would be nice, it has been over 4 years and I wanted to ask, would be nice to end a story and not like the idass of the tv series Alphas the story with a cliffhanger end and then simply stop the show and let us hang in the air forever
AnonymousIDFK chapter 9 . 11/25/2017
Please finish this, and get the others to rescue him! Great writing skills and can't wait to see what happens xx :)
Guest chapter 9 . 8/13/2017
Please continue this, its amazing :) perhaps you could go into the after effects like when he is rescued, how he doesn't trust them or is insane :)
Felix Runck chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
When you finally update this story
Guest chapter 9 . 6/19/2017
I swear to goodness, this is the best fanfic I've ever read;) I hope you finish it cause it totally left me hanging, and I'm freaking out because of the whole cliffhanger... ( FYI you're an amazing writer)
Blayde chapter 9 . 6/17/2017
Please continue this and finish it, it is really good. Pleeeeeeeeeeeease? XD
sofiathe23rd chapter 9 . 6/8/2017
Hiiiii
This is really good, I mean...um... Yeah. Please continue it! I know it's been like 3 years but it's cool if you could continue this story! I want KF to be rescued, but still broken! Anyway, thanks, bye!
BatgirlFan102 chapter 9 . 5/23/2017
Here's what I'd do for the next couple chapters: the team doesn't find Wally until after Dick becomes Nightwing, Jason dies/comes back to life, and Tim is Robin. Wally's pretty much lost hope at this point and is breaking from it. Then one day Red Hood infiltrates the facility and finds Wally. He then gets him out and brings him to Dr. Tompkins to treat his physical injuries. Knowing letting Dick know about Wally's state would attract attention and risk him going back to Arkham, he instead calls Tim to help Wally emotionally. Wally gets super clingy and Jason has to deal with that and after a few months breaks the news to the team and Flash, who all get super emotional and Jason disappears. He later returns to check on Wally and reconcile with his family.
That's what I would do, but please continue so I can see what you have planned
BatgirlFan102 chapter 9 . 5/3/2017
Please continue
thepinkpanda chapter 6 . 3/23/2017
In the first two paragraphs you say, "young hero" way too much. But overall I love your story line very nice!
thepinkpanda chapter 3 . 3/23/2017
Overall a very good story line, just think you use "speedster" too much, switch it up a bit.
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