I could totally imagine Gold being chubby when he was younger. I totally loled at the part when Silver called Gold a bastard.

lol

Interesting way of using the Red String of Fate; I've never read it being all tattered and stuff, but nice touch! The depiction of the two as kids was SO adorable!

Great writing style, and I particularly enjoy the subtleness of romance without any "romance." If that makes sense ']

Will there be more? I'm reading this amazing story on my PSP! I almost died of laughter when silver called gold that bastered that got him caught! There has to be more! Now...time to return to one of you're many silent lurkers. *sneeks away to read more*

Great story! Lols I laughed when I read silver calling gold that basterd that got him caught xD hehehe love your fanfics and preciousmetalshipping!

This might not mean much but...even though I'm not a fan of PreciousMetalShipping (since my friend calls me Gold and I call him Silver...you know XD lol) this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read on here. :) The plot is really good even if it's random and I like how you got their characters/personality perfectly! The ending made me laugh lol XD

That was soooo cute. :3 And lol "I was about to rob you, anyway." Yeah right Silver. You couldn't rob your future boyfriend. ;D

~happy sigh~ I love your stories. :3 Never stop writing.

How cute! Silver and Gold were adorable when they were young...

The string of fate at the end was just too much, you've got me to smile even after a bad day...Good job! ;)

Well, I can say I like Silver here more than your other Silvers. He 's quite cold and harsh like in manga, not a over-girly Silver. That make this story more interesting. Plus harder for Gold or anyone to win his heart. Hope you 'll keep this Silver in future stories!

cute story :) LOVE preciousmetal!