Please make more chapters how it goes on with the second child

You can name the new baby... girl: kiyoko (pure child ) boy:seiji (second - born son and please finish the story in a happy ending ideas: you can make asmi think that takaba is cheating on him with another guy and make sure that at the end asami finds out that it's not true and that takaba has NOT cheated on him/ please I BEG YOU TO FINISH THE STORY AND FORGET SOME YAOI ️ THANK YOU LOVE YOU

please update soon ~

i dont know if this is a good idea or not, make asami parents do something to make sure that he and aki to break and cause aki to miscarriage... or make jealous 'in the middle of nowhere' women avenge to aki...
I dont know... maybe this is helpful... btw i love your story... evnethough i usually dont read this kind of genre...hahah...keep up the good work pal...

This is a very cool fanfic and could you make more chapters soon please I like to see what happens next to Asami and Akihito together more.

Getting positive results on a pregnancy test when you're a guy means you have prostate cancer... RIP Akihito.

So I've notice that your perception of time is off. You said he was in the hospital for ten weeks and yet he is still in his fifth month of pregnancy. Technically he should be in his 8th. Then at they end you said five months to go, that means he is supposed to be in his fourth month. I'm just saying he isn't an elephant

plz update plz

Will you continue the story?

I like the interview idea.
Also you should have akihito have some kind of health problem and he and asami are worried they might loose the baby and really show how akihito and asami would handle it together

Crimson spell!

I'm maybe a little harsh but I'm glad yuri died lol

Update please

I generaly don't root violence, but she clearly deserved it?

That bitch should just have died ugh, I hate him