xD the WCHB tho. Now that I think about it, he really is an idiot.

THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD #GREENDESERVESBETTER

“It’s not like I was hit by spike cannon”. Hmmmmm

Yeah the revival thing was pretty dumb as i see no reason they couldn't have all been revived without a penalty memory loss? Cost of 15 years per each? What kind of sense does that make? Can't there be one story with a happy ending i really just read this just to see green and blue get together at the end but once she dided i just skipped to the end. Little word of advice if you want people to read a story to the end don't kill off the people their reading the story because. Hell i know this is Pokemon but in dbz just wish everyone back and it's fine that's what you should've done yeah it's a little anti climatic but no one cares about that yes it makes death not a big deal anymore but you could've just made it a one time thing. Either that's the way i feel about it i disagree with the revival rules because yes they sounded pretty dumb and all in all it's bullshit but it is your story and even though i fucking hated the ending the story overall was good but if you had done the revival the way it shouldve been done I'd say it was fantastic but either way your writing skills are damn well worth praise and i hope you continue to make these stories but next time leave death out of it you can make a good story without a cliche everyone dies at the end thing just give it a happy ending and i promise people will enjoy the story MUCH more but anyways that's all i have to say GL with your future works and PLZ try to keep the heroes ALIVE this time but anyways that's all i have to say farewell...

I know this is rather late considering when you posted it but why didn't Gold get the RLS system instead which could have saved his life. True it would make sense in the story cause character death helps to develop the story and feels and you probably already decided on the characters to die beforehand but if it were in reality that RLS system might have been able to reduce the death count by one. Even though Platinum would have needed it cause she was bait, Gold as the person at the bottleneck would have suffered more damage so he should have gotten the shield instead. Just a random thought. Great story though :)

IF THE S STANDS FOR SIRID IMMA BE VERY PISSED BECAUSE THE LAST STORY I READ THAT FEATURED SIRID, EVERYONE FREAKING DIED.

Fantasic work! I've allready read the entire work, but chose to review on this chapter as to me, it's the saddest (due to golds death, although I'm quite glad he was revived). The story line was fabulous, the characters accurate and the writing nice and flowy. The only thing that didn't quite sit right with me was that Silver wasn't shown to really care too much about Golds death here- I understand his sister blue died the same day, but as seen in HGSS and the end of the first gold and silver arc, the two have grown very close, much like blue and red. (Especially since silvers been going to golds house for the tv!) in my opinion, the story could have benefited from a paragraph, then little snippets across the rest of the story that shows Silvers true bond with gold and his greif after his dead, alongside a little bit more for blue, too- and maybe his reunion with gold after he comes back to life. Overall though, you've done a wonderful job!

Please tell AsylusGoji91 that Im sorry and that he should say sorry too and make animation where Princess Shroob apologies right now (sobbing)

ARE YOU KIDDING ME? Instead of killing Yellow, you kill Red *right in front of her*?! UGH. I still love this story and the emotional roller coaster, though.

This is so unpredictable, I'm just praying at this point that Yellow doesn't get killed, too. Why are all my favorites going down? (yes that includes White XD) Ah, well. This is a great story!

Ah, White's small part in this chapter was hilarious, just like the rest of it! I love this crossover intermission and the actual story, as well, of course

In manga we don't know if Arceus created copies of Sinnoh legends or just summoned them into human dimension. Cause diamond and pearl occurs after heartgold and soulsilver arc, Cynthia is shown in a scene where she sees Dialga and Palkia flying back home

In chapter 26 eight year olds just killed a bunch of ppl I mean that is insane how can they do that they are freaking kids

Ok I have read till half of the story upto chapter 26
This story seems too female oriented
I don't think Blue is so strong if you don't agree you check her pokemon levels in the net.
Sapphire doesn't even compare to Gold's pokemon majority of his team is in 80 levels whereas all of her pokemon are only in 50 levels.
And all those moves Platinum performed against Red, will a sheltered rich lady able to do that (I mean pokemon battles she has talent but fighting not really).
Male Dexholders are portrayed too stupid it is not like that they perform really well in all the crisis in the manga.
Most of the time they are only there for shipping moments not doing anything worthwhile.

Best 'completed' story I've red.. I've made a goal into reading ALL your stories regardless when you wrote it even if it was 2 years back... And SA is the reason why my eyes are constantly being sore and why I sob in the middle of the night, or laugh all of a sudden, and curse in broad daylight (for a reason only I knew).

I really look up to your writing skills. Do hope you write even more inspiring/heartshattering/funny/very creative stories..