Reviews for Once Bitten
Kksmum chapter 23 . 6/27
I am rereading my favorite stories. I will intend to read all of yours again.
I love this one. Its a good long read with loads of stuff going on. Terror, romance, action. I know, I am so eloquent, not.
Sins of my past is another of my faves; read it 3 times I think.
Ace Runner chapter 21 . 3/11
I love your sense of humor and your writing I know its 2020 and you probably won't see this but Emmet and his antics just made my day.
JojoJinx chapter 57 . 3/4
2 questions to this brilliant story... How did the Paris go trip come about? And how did vampire Linda manage to cry? Is it because of her wolf genes that she can cry despite being a vampire or just a memory lapse that vampires can't cry?
JojoJinx chapter 56 . 3/4
I think the fact renee didn't speak to Bella and edward about it first is kind of classic renee and also she didn't plan it by the sounds of it. An unexpected pregnancy right? I can't help but think they'll have to keep the baby from Charlie but mostly Linda for the first few years. Although if bella wraps her shield around the babs then she'd be OK i guess... Just no holding.
Finally why wasn't sue clearwater at the wedding?!
JojoJinx chapter 1 . 3/4
I haven't read hunted in seattle yet but after reading this in chapter 50 I'm guessing this is where it was born...
"I'd do anything for Edward, as he would for me. Abstaining from killing humans so as to be able to spend eternity with the one you loved seemed like an easy choice to me. But then, I hadn't spent close to three hundred years pandering to the monster that becoming a vampire had birthed within me.

I shuddered at the thought of how different things would have been if I'd been changed by someone other than Edward and hadn't had the Cullens to guide me."
JojoJinx chapter 49 . 3/4
Haha bella Always said she felt towards jacob as a sister felt towards a brother
JojoJinx chapter 15 . 2/27
Whooooop go bella. Glad to see Rose and the others accepting and realising the connection and similarity between Tanya's projected images and sexual assault. Really hoping that it's not going to be predictable and Tanya will go to the volturi for revenge or something though . Have to wait and see... Chapter 16 here i come.
dandelion1112 chapter 12 . 2/22
Great chapter, thank you! Bella tells Edward about her life, so she doesn't lose her memories and Edward gets to know her better. Then Bella's first hunt! Exhilarating! In the End, she goes for Edward. I just hope that will clear the air and not make things between them more complicated.
dandelion1112 chapter 11 . 2/22
Bella's feelings are all over the top. She is grieving, confused, insecure and in love... It is difficult for her to cope. And Edward? He dares not to hope, he can't see beyond his guilt. It is very complicated for both of them.
Thank you as o much for this story!
dandelion1112 chapter 9 . 2/22
Poor Bella! She is doubting herself so much! I hope it won't take long fo her to discover how deeply she affects Edward!
dandelion1112 chapter 8 . 2/22
So, they have to stay in Forks for a while. My guess is: complications are on the way.
dandelion1112 chapter 7 . 2/22
Poor Bella! She must feel as a leaf in the wind with her mood swings. But she learns about her shield and gets a first grip how to control it. That's good. I am glad Carlisle tells Rose not to be so judgemental!
dandelion1112 chapter 6 . 2/22
Bella is very confused and angry. But she doesn't act as selfless as she is often described. I like that a lot. It makes her more realistic. She has a need, she experiences that Edward's presence helps her and she acts upon this need.
dandelion1112 chapter 5 . 2/22
Bella is furious - with reason! - and Edward does not defend himself. He takes her aggression as part of his punishment.
But: Even in her fury, Bella finds comfort in Edward's touch. Let's see what the future brings!
dandelion1112 chapter 4 . 2/22
Thank you so much! This story is so intense, it takes my breath away! I love the way you describe Edward. He is guilt ridden and cares abut Bella so much. My guess is, Bella will forgive him in time but I hope he will be able to forgive himself. - - - I dislike Rosalie. Ye, she is very protective of Bella, but she clearly lacks empathy. She is convinced her point of view is the only one to have. It is sad. She judges merciless. I hope she is going to change through the story.
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