I love your style of writing! I felt totally immersed in the story, able to experience the sights,sounds,smells and feel it all as though I were there!

haha cute story :) one minor error though... Wheatley is attacked by the bird after GLaDOS breaks him. but other than that great story :) I love that bird!

Hehehe.

It was that bird the whole time...it's trying to take over Aperture science, I just know it!