I realize it’s been a few years but it would be excellent if you started streaming your conscience again. It’s so entertaining

Bella shows Edward the magazine and all Edward can say is "ok"? And he buys bella a PLASTIC DIAMOND? SERIOUSLY?

Well I guess it makes sense. With as many women as hes fucked I guess he cant afford to buy each of them diamonds...he'd be broke.

Tell me, how many STDS has Edward had? We all know that as LOOSE as he is hes had at LEAST ONE.

Why would bella want to be with a manwhore? Fucking disgusting! He actually purposely dates porn stars? Their like the most used up people on the planet and hes ok fucking them? What he doesn't care where he sticks his dick? That's so fucking gross!

I'm hopeful you'll come back to this. My favorite stories are an obsessive Edward!

against my better judgement, i read this. i never read incomplete stories, but you had me in the first thousand words. i suppose this is foolish of me, but i'm going to dare to dream that you'll update this.

i saw a lot of comments about this being unrealistic. that's why it's called fiction, no? and has no one ever played with the idea of 'love at first sight'? i certainly think it exists, and the way you write and weave your words doesn't make it sound grandiose. your edward is a little crazy but a lot of heartfelt and i love him and this and you for writing it.

again, hoping against hope here... please update? xx

This is pretty interesting. Please update.

Hey. Just found this. It is good. Interesting. Don't suppose you finished it and didn't post here? Would love to hear more. Thanks.

i see you haven't updated this in a couple years, but please do it's interesting.

i've reviewed the following chapters except for this one and have yet to actually say what i want to so i'm gonna say it here: everybody talks how unrealistic this is but it's fiction for a reason, but fuck everybody i fucking love this it's like heroin i want to keep injecting it into my veins until my all possible veins swell up and explode and i'll be in total utter bliss and please please update

i can't help but think, assume, this kind of edward and bella's love story is of course going to end like in a post-hurricane scene but shit it's a kind of hurricane that you want to experience, even just once

i haven't showered since yesterday morning and it's now today evening this fanfic is keeping me away from the shower curse you

i can't imagine how edward felt in that closet lmao what an experience

i've had two sticks of cigarettes and two bottles of local creamy ass cold coffee and my veins are pumping to the beat of the masen's tunes i love it i love it

I WANNA FUCKING SCREAM

PLEASE UPDATE THIS :(