wow wat a story didnt except it to end likes it

very interesting and seductive

hot and steamy

ii absouloutly loved this

I really liked this story! :) Good end ;)

I like it really good love the story line

Loving it so far!

I liked this..but i wouldve liked a bella/jake/edward story cause that would be hot.. i didnt really get the part with sam..other then sam wanted to do him and then my question is the next time hes in heat is he gonna just take anyone nearby that offers? cause...sam seemed willing and hes got a mate..so uhh...?

I was kinda hoping jake would run into edward.. then happy bella/jake/edward triangle.. sam..meh.. not interested.

Poor Jake when ut came to Sam.

Wonderful ending for Jake and Bella.

I couldn't help but feel that Alice's call sounded more like a guilt trip attempt.

Well done overall.

Finally for B/E! Good riddance of that bloodsucker.

Oh no for Jacob and Sam!

She made her final decision for sure right? I don't wanna have her do all these wonderful things with Jake only to have them mean nothinmg as she runs back to Edward.

Jake's happiness should be contagious!

Nicely done!

Poor Jacob. So in wolf form, the rest of the pack would attack him in response to this heat? Yikes.

Although I want Bella with Jacob, that doesn't mean I like her ideas of using Jake to help him through his heat while she's still with Edward. Bella really needs to straighten up her act (and I feel like that with the books too).

Love your story!

Wow! What an intense read.

I had not yet read a fic like, the sexy times was hawt.

Enjoyed it thank you!