en lo personal a pesar de tener 22 capítulos Me parece que la historia fue realmente corta hubo muchas cosas que podrías haber cambiado y fueron muchos capítulos paró sucesos tampocos además algunos fueron demasiado apresurados y amontonados sin embargo la historia en sí tiene mucho potencial y sería bueno que lo seguirás continuando tal vez una vez que acabes con la idea puedas reescribirla de manera diferente o alguien más lo haga Eso ya depende de ti Yo sólo puedo escribir qué sigues con historia porque es muy buena

:( man i like the mother/son relationship better

one thing i. Ever understood about the show... why did toharu keep making things with leeks when she knew kyo hates them?

Why didnt he change when he enveloped her in his arms?

Sucks that her moment to shine was tarnished but it might bring the two of them closer so thats a plus.

...seriously? How is she letting this demon get to her so easily, hypnotic eyes or not!

Man, its always so heart breaking when shippo gets left behind, why doesnt anyone send him with her?! I mean think about it for a kag/kyo pair it would be perfect because shippos and kyos hair would match, theyd look like his actual parents!

Nice

I bet it's a pervert.

It's been a couple years since the last update but I truly hope that you continue with it. I can't wait to read more:D!

I really love your story please update it real soon. Thanks.

I love their attitudes with Kagome~! Oh~! I just had a thought! Is Tohru Miroku's and Sango's descendant~? I wanna know~! See ya~!
~Kura

I see one problem with this chapter... When giving girls (Tohru) free hugs, he's supposed to turn into a rat~!
~Kura

I love your story! i hope that you continue it soon! looking forward to the next chapter. update as soon as possible please!

Inuyasha meets kyo