Reviews for The Marauders
Someone chapter 1 . 7/7
Nice fic
but it says
That Peter is the one that was meant for hufflepuff and he is and it says that he was the traitor and he betrayed them
Isn't hufflepuff supposed to be the house for loyalty
yes chapter 1 . 3/29
James was actually one of the best chasers.
Katness2007 chapter 1 . 12/27/2018
1: James was a chaser
2: Hufflepuff are Loyal and just, things that Peter are not.
3:Slytherin? Puh-leas, Sirius would rather die
4: ...he still Gryffindor tho
Wolfiegamer chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
thats ok i didnt need my heart anyways
WildChild0303 chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
Wasn't James a chaser?
aprilgirl01 chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
wow! This is really awesome, in so few words!
xxCallMeAmyxx chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
I really liked this. Short and sweet
The Silver Tongued Alpha chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
This was so sweet. Very well put together great job. If you could wrote a story with the marauders having all the characteristics i would be in love.
IJustWantToHelp chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
This story violates Rule One of FN: Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc are not allowed.

This story had no plot at all, so this story breaks the rules.

You could probably just move this to your profile. It'd do we'll there. Maybe some people would copy and paste it. :P

Sincerely
IJustWantToHelp
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Lilae Kane chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
First of all, this is not a story, it is a list, or description, both of which are not allowed on this site.
Second, you have reader interaction, because your readers review with their opinions and answers to the question that you ask at the end.
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NSDCars5 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
"Peter Pettigrew: The boy meant for Hufflepuff."
Hufflepuffs are LOYAL people... :P

"Remus Lupin: ...Magnet for Blacks."
Dora wasn't a Black... she was a Tonks. :P

"James Potter: ...Creator of The Marauders...Best seeker ever known."
All four together made the Marauders. And he was a Chaser.

"Sirius Black: The one meant for Slytherin."
He'd kill you if he saw the fic.
Cairin chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Erm...correction? I think Peter Pettigrew wasn't meant for Hufflepuff cause it's the house for loyalty and friendship which is so unlike him. He betrayed his friends so...yeah. He wasn't meant for Hufflepuff.
Something Unpretty chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Actually, Peter was meant for Slytherin, and Sirius was meant for Gryffindor. All of them were except Wormtail.
MischiefManaged97 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Under Remus, where it said "The Last Marauder", it was kind of like a jolt because even though I'd realized that, it's still really sad!
Flying in the Wind chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I have to agree with krazyknoxy: The thing that is valued the most in Hufflepuff is loyality and the first word that comes to my mind when I think of Peter is "traitor". That makes it the house where he fits least.

And to the question what the sorting hat was thinking: Dumbledore said that "It's our choices that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities."
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