I can’t read this anymore. You basically turned Hinata into Sakura with all the hitting. Thumbs-down if I could.

half of this chapter got repeated.

Jesus, this is garbage.

Any chance for a sequel? *grin*

You're a fucking joke. I can't believe you tagged this as complete. Shitty SI story to go along with it. Don't deny it.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Wonderful. Clean with a little fluff and romance. Sadly no lemons but the story was still well worth reading

So far love this.

I'm gonna be honest. The ending was cute, I liked the whole thing, I'm honestly kinda pissed that it ends there though. it leaves so much open and honestly doesn't make much sense. It's clear you left it there because you either didn't want to or couldn't continue writing (which I can't be angry for, things happen), I'm just annoyed that there's not even a note or anything saying that you're leaving it there instead. You just stop there and leave it open. If you continued it then it could've, and probably would've, been a great fic. The fact that you didn't is sadly a let down

Chapter one has quite an entire segment that repeats itself and chapter 30 starts in what appears to be the middle of the chapter starting with Naruto speaking with Kabuto.

you have a repeated segment in chapter 1, the part about Temari leaving and that whole scene is duplicated

The greatest mistake Itachi made was taking Sasuke into the Tsukuyomi and forcing him to relive the massacre over and over again and telling him that hatred was the only way Sasuke could ever kill Itachi.
Oh, it's eight years too late, but why on earth would Naruto ever teach his foxes English? It's a Japanese anime, based on Japanese Mythology, check out "Themes" in Naruto Wikipedia.

Was this the end? I can't wait for more if there is!

Is this the ending or what? So cute

The 4th shinobi war haven't start during the wave mission