continue?

haha. me when I am hyper. Continue?

happy writing.

haha. me when I am hyper. Continue?

happy writing.

Sorry I didn't really review for the other chapters. I wanted to read all of it quickly because of how good it is. This story is excellent. Another thing is I cut my thumb open trying to open a can of peaches, (wow I sound stupid) so I now have a bandaid on my thumb which makes it very hard to type considering I'm on a kindle typing this. Anywho away from my humiliating story about me cutting open my thumb on a can of peaches this story is really good. Apart from the occasional accidental capital letter this story is awesome and I enjoy it. Mikayla is an interesting character and has a lot of potential. Try your best to make sure she isn't a Mary Sue though. She isn't but it is a possibility she turns into one. So try to make her imperfect but not so imperfect people don't like her. So far you're doing a great job that was just a bit of a warning just in case. This story is pretty cool so far though. I also really like Dan's character.
She is awesome. Anyway I hope you update soon because this is an epic story. Now for a little reminder.
UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON OR ELSE HALT SHALL SHOOT YOU!
I think that's a good reminder to update, don't you?

That'll teach him to get his apprentice to like coffee was he even thinking about how his stores will run out quicker now.

I believe that it's true enough. they are completely different skills, and therefore use different muscles, but you would get stronger overall by chopping wood, and will was kinda s*** at shooting a bow at first too. as a archery expert, i would say that for the sake of the story, we can hand out some artistic licences for anatomy here.

Hi, ya'll

I'm so happy you're a Christian! I am too! Good job. (I don't really like coffee)

I liked it, but I think Mikayla is to smart. Just a little.

This WILL be interesting... I'm stung that Will lost the "argument" though.

Woa! Déjà vu!

Your right so not like other rangers apprentice fanfics

Hey great story, um could you update soon please?

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