Reviews for Hazy And A Bit Crazy
Guest chapter 7 . 6/4/2015
This is really great I hope you didn't drop it
IronBat chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
Aww, that was cute, but it would've been a better-ending if the bad-ass Scorpion actually said 'I love you'...just sayin'. But other than that, the story was amusing and comforting...
PEACE!
IronBat chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
Again, I enjoyed this chapter. I hope you did well on your Regents; I passed my Geometry and Earth-Science this year, and I'm so proud I did!
I can't wait to see what favor Subby-Wubby is gonna ask Scorpo...'cause this will be interesting...PEACE!
IronBat chapter 4 . 8/3/2014
Woop-woop! The sex-scene was pretty hot, and the part with Mileena made me laugh. I'm a little upset that Kuai still isn't getting into the mojo they have goin'. But I guess that's how love is, right?
PEACE!
IronBat chapter 2 . 7/31/2014
Haha, oh Mileena and her weird teddy-bear. XD
Anyway, for some reason I like where this is going, and I'll be glad to continue...PEACE!
IronBat chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Hey, this was actually pretty interesting! And I wonder what Scorpion is thinkin' about...XD
PEACE!
Imgayashellandidoitsowell chapter 7 . 5/29/2013
;-; omg...this...this story...;-; I love the ending, I love the beginning, I love the middle, I love everything...why must you stop here? This is my favorite story...you are the bestest person ever...your writing captures my attention with each word...it's beautiful..((even though I googled 29 words X'D)) Great Job...seriously
Guest chapter 7 . 5/6/2013
OMG I FEEL SO INSPRIED...HOLY COW THIS WAS RAD!
not telling the unknown chapter 6 . 1/5/2013
I want the teddy Scorpion and Sub-Zero, they'er too cute.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/26/2012
excellent. loved it.
DetectiveOmnipotent1313 chapter 7 . 8/24/2012
Glad you finished it! :)
I liked the ending. XDDD
Xlimax chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
it was great while it lasted definitely but the hole between smoke and sub bothers me a little
the ending was strangely satisfying altho it doesleave a lot to imagination. you like to torture your readers with cliffhangers but it's alright! we all imagine a happy ending for this pairing even tho it doesn't involve fluffy clouds and ponies i imagine that their love will be mutual and beautiful even. oh and before you had a place holder for you end saw it and i thought it was very elegant how you drew sub and scorpion's face,. luvv the mustache :D
This PWP certainly had a good aftertaste :)
Dulcamara chapter 7 . 7/21/2012
Still sad the fic is ending thoug...;A;
Guest chapter 7 . 7/19/2012
THANK YOU GOD.

I jizzed. Lul.
Crazybeetch chapter 7 . 7/19/2012
Smut in its purest form. YES!
Loving and strangely explicitly EROTIC! COULD'VE NOT ASKED FOR MORE BLOWJOBS IN ONE CHAPTER! No spanking ass no sticking it in! NO ANAL INTERCOURSE! OH YEEEAAA
i Betcha someone was secretly wanting a ass on crapper action! i know i did.
SCorpion even used the 3 forbidden words in his mind! I LUV YOU! NOOOOO! but neither oneofthem had the guts to say fluffy rommanctic words thank you! you were able to get that manlove
im acting like a carzy bitch but deep down inside...

I thank you for completing this fic! This chapter was definitely more fulfilling than the picture you drew (even if that picture was BEAUTIFULLY ROMANTIC AND SEXY!) you can't draw hardcore stuff, so the kiss didn't suffice. Heheeee, write another ScorpionxSub-WUB yaoi?
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