God, I don't know how many times I have read this, but I can't stop coming back to read again! A wonderful piece of mastery. Thank you!

that fanfic needs a bloody sequel! for example with future tsuna

*Hold my nose coz I have noseblend*

Good ! ...*withshakythumbsup*

Cute ! After this, no one wants to mess with Hibari's stuffs anymore!

I hate how tsuna is like fuck me , fuck me harder and he's like supposed to have injuries and like. be a scared innocent virgin like Wtf dude like we ignored the fact that tsuna is 15 and adult hibari () is 27 (doesnt matter cause he's Hot ) hibari needs to be like the ok ne leading the conversation and not be a little bitch saying he's oh the food is mine and hibari is siko ... every one is out of charcter ur supposed say how beautiful stupid tsuna was in hibari's eyes how inosent and cute and how he cant reseed him and sadesticly abuses his bruised body Awwww .. plz do something like this

Kyyyaaaa I love Kyōya and tsuna they're the best couple ever

Can u make another one hot with fifth words and slutty action s please yaoi hibari and tsuna

I like tsuna punishment a hell of a lot

It was interesting. This was the first TYL!Hibari x Tsuna one shot that I have read, so I must admit, it was well. You have a few grammatical errors as far as words that spelled and sound alike. For example "fuck you until you know who you belong two" it should be "too" and a few others but over all, I enjoy reading your story keep out the good work :)

hehehehehhehe i love it and the my herbivore part that was pure gold!

*nosebleed*

I like it! **

Uwah! HIBARI! PERVERT~!

But cute...XD THAT WAS COOL!

OMG~! I LOVE THIS! -dies from an endless nosebleed-

I loved your story and I think Tsuna et hibari were in character. But I saw many mistakes which contrast with your good story. bye