I wrote something similar to this, giving Phantom Dharak some closure about a year ago, since I hated what became of him after Code Eve. I'm glad that he sent Gill though to a fiery grave, especially since he just had it coming for killing Kazarina.

Poor Lumagrowl though, losing his partner. I guess his fate is better compared to his other comrades though. Really great story here!

Poor lumagrowl I so sad for him

Oh wow I feel real sorry for Lumagrowl at first I really didn't care but after reading this whoa ...man I don't know what to say

Hmm...funny. I thought it was on Neathia. But whatever. I LOVED THIS! *hyper from Froot Loops this morning*

When Kazarina was first introduced on Bakugan, I was screaming "KILL HER!" at the TV screen. I loathed her guts...I also hated her Bakugan Lumagrowl (or Wolfgang). I wished they'd both be dead. I got my wish with Kazarina...but here's the thing, on the episode on which she was killed...remember how she shouted that stuff about becoming Barodius's queen? When she did so...I was like 'ah...I see what's going on here'. I guess that was her redeeming quality. I later felt so sorry for poor Lumagrowl...seeing as he didn't get his happy ending like Linus/Rubanoid did. (Bakugan now kills way too many characters in my opinion...slightly taking it too far since it's Shonen/little kid) This is

P.S: I don't get the subbed version...my Tv onlys plays dub and I don't get it on my computer either. From your perspective...is the subbed better? Spin Master is a pretty good dubbing company in my opinion...unlike 4Kids. Can you tell me your opinion? Thanks!

Dang it! I was already crying today, and now I am again! But that just shows how wonderful this fic is. I like your idea for Kazarina's past. I think it does a good job with how she couldn't have been cruel and cold from the start. And the whole fate thing with Lumagrowl made sense, too.

In short, it's a wonderful fanfiction, like your other oneshots with the reflecting back on people they lost.

It was a very touvhing fic. And yes, lots of fans hate Kazarina, but thanks to Lumagrowl, the concept of her changes.

Ill read more of your stuff. Keep up the good job!