| Reviews for Becoming Clean |
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Jynova chapter 1 . 4/19/2016 The first time I read this story, I went away not liking it. But I've re-read the story multiple times, which is contradictory to my initial outlook. I'm pretty sure I've isolated it to the ending being so hastily thrown together. I actually heartily enjoy the ending too but the transition is too quick and the resolution isn't as fulfilling. I doubt you would alter it at this stage but I would love it if you added more to the ending or even just continued the story...! Anyways, nice concept and decently conveyed! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2016 That would have turned out hella bad if you keep going cause he has a problem. |
Daphmir57 chapter 1 . 4/28/2014 Well, then. Ands remembers, don'ts apologizies fors somethings yous enjoyed! |
DevilPrincessOfDarkWorld chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 Hmmm...nice take...oh and I have a challenge for you... can you make a story of this paring where lelouch is a drug dealer and suzaku is FBI/NBI agent and the rest is up to you :)) I'll be waiting bye! D.P.D.W |
sweethearteve143 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 This was really interesting, I like your writing style. I wish there was more! I think it has great potential to be a two shot. ;) |
pennilee chapter 1 . 1/19/2013 Aww. The ending was unexpected, but sweet. :) |
wal-erie chapter 1 . 11/1/2012 Thats soooo cute! I like the ide of suzaku being a sexaddict ;) :D |
GothicDebby chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 3 lots of love :D |
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012 Aww... That's beautiful. That last scene just made my eyes teary - haven't gotten that feeling in a while :) |
Phantom Illusion chapter 1 . 5/25/2012 Lovely :) Aww Suzaku, can't bear the thought of cheating on Lelouch? Love the ending especially, the kiss was very sweet, and it had a air of finality to it that ends well. Your writing style works really well in this fic; a sort of slightly choppy style that works best in one-shots. Sigh As much as I'd love for this to be continued, there isn't a great deal to go on to, not without introducing a whole lot of angst and the like anyway. Good job on a great fic! |
MillyAshfordFan chapter 1 . 6/6/2011 Yay! I found you on here! I loved this. You have such a great writing style. It's so smooth and not bogged down by too much description. I think I liked the last part the best. It was so eloquent and sweet, and it makes me feel hopeful that Suzaku will try to be exclusive for Lelouch's sake. :) Anyway, great job and fav'd. 3 |
Nessie-san chapter 1 . 6/5/2011 This was REALLY, REALLY good. I haven't read a Code Geass fic this good in a long time. You should continue it, I think. Make it into a multi-chapter thing. It's a really amazing fic, and you and whoever originally came up with the idea for this need to be thanked personally by the gods. Also, the grammar on this was REALLY good, which always makes me even more happy - So, awesome job, Rex-san, and I'm gonna read the rest of your stuff - |
rkemy chapter 1 . 6/1/2011 OP loves you! I thought I’d never find out who wrote this for me, so I’m glad you decided to post it on ffnet after all. I think I already told you how much I love this fill, and at this point I’d just repeat myself. Just know that it still makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you so much for writing this! |
julyannoe chapter 1 . 6/1/2011 Pretty good story, are you going to continue? Please don't say its a one-shot. |