I thought they were going to be dead. I'm so glad the ending came out nicely.

This just touches my heart, seriously. I love the concept of the story, the style, and the way you portrayed both Arthur and Francis. The suspense kept me on edge the whole time! And that last scene... you showed their emotions without words. They... I... I have no other words, because this is complete perfection.

Crap, now I'm wanting more. Plus translations of what Francis has been saying.

This is so awesome. I want to see a nyotalia version of this.

So, what exactly was Francis saying? And also was Arthur supposed to 4 or 14 when his parents died? 'Cos if he found Francis thirty years later, the latter age makes him way too old to sound like a teenager in his thoughts.

Very good read historically and well hetalialy!

Aww cute not perverted baby france

Awesome job. The first person prospective was excellently executed. I was on edge the entire fic, great way to keep the suspense.

So now you write in the dark ages? You, my friend, are quickly proving yourself to have earned the title of awesome given to you.

I really enjoyed reading this, I like France being younger than England, it somehow seems more fitting to me. (Creative liberties win, if you can fill in your existing slots perfectly by using some, you do it!)

I am such a weirdo, I like darker things and I got strange looks when I went "YES!" when we spent the day going over the Black Death in class. You know how that works. You write everything well, I can't stress it enough~

I wonder wats gonna happen next

I love this. It is well written and kept me reading until the end!

Gosh, I got so scared at one point and thought that Arthur and Francis were going to meet their end! D;

But once again, very well written and well done~! :)

~ xMirror-Mirrorx