Very sad, I loved it!

Wow...what a...startling ending, to say the least. THis was absolutely brilliant, and no, it's not just something I say, because I rarely say that about fics. This definitely makes Cho more real...I can definitely imagine Cho's Asian parents. XD

It's just...such a tragic ending, but completely believable. It's not canon (we know she lives at least until the Battle) but nonetheless...adlfkaldkfjadlfk, I'm really not sure what I should say about this, it was just that brilliant. Cho's logic was completely believable and brilliantly expounded upon...the writing was nearly perfect (I think a previous reviewer already talked about having a few grammar mistakes). Just...wow.

Favorited. XD

That was one emotional story. Cho's thoughts and feelings came across very clearly, especially her grief for Cedric.

I found it kind of sad how Cho was treated after she had wiped her own memories. Maybe you could write one about what happens after she killed herself (which I'm assuming she did...without writing a suicide note to explain herself).

What a wonderful piece! I saw a few things here and there that could have been corrected. (Just slight grammatical errors. Nothing to worry about.) I felt that this piece really brought Cho Chang together as a character, rather than the classic portrayal of her as a whiney brat. To me this was very well written and had great realism. (To be personally honest, I've wondered in my time as a fan: Exactly what is the suicide rate for wizards?) It seems to be a topic not really ever addressed in the Harry Potter world, and it was quite refreshing to see it. Overall I greatly enjoyed this piece! (Everyone loves a good angst/tragedy every now and then!) Bravo!

-Katherine

so sad, well done loved it :)