Wow. This is so dark and intense, I love it. It's interesting to see Jesse and Rachel in such a bad situation. I really hope that Rachel keeps her promise and stays. I can't imagine Jesse ever finding the incentive to be sober if he doesn't have the girl he loves anymore.

Update soon! (Can't wait for the next chapter of Hit Me With Your Best Shot too!)

It sounds so dramatic ! I love !

This is beautiful. I have no words, except, I'm speechless. It's so, so sad.

Very interesting. I never imagined Jesse as an alcoholic. I'm very interested in where you will take this. Looking forward to more!