The f*ck? Both Ron Weasley and Pansy Parkinson are pureblood; how did they get paired together? Also, overall writing is just meh and grammar is bad-you only have about half of the commas you need.

I was also wondering why you have certain pairings as they are...
The wording was "all pureblood women or men will be ordered by the Ministry of Magic to marry a witch or wizard of mixed or muggleborn descent."
Draco and Luna are both purebloods, as are Ron and Pansy.
Helga Umbridge is questionable, as Dolores umbridge was listed as a half-blood on Pottermore, but Helga's parentage isn't given.
I don't know what to think about Ginny and Greyback, since I don't know his ancestry, but I'm assuming he is at least a half-blood despite his werewolf status.

Um, you keep using the word "trilled" where somebody's getting yelled at.
Are you sure you're not getting it confused with "shrilled"?
Because I'm pretty sure trilling is basically another word for singing...

LOVED IT SO GOOD

If i wear ginny i would be like

HELL NO AM I MARRYING HIM HE WILL FORCE ME TO HAVE SEX WITH HIM FOR GOD DAMM SAKE I WOULD RATHER GO TO HELL
Just sayin but i think i live in heaven otherwise im screwed fo days

Loved this story and appreciated your synopsis of how the rest would have gone. I wish more people who find themselves in positions unable to finish their stories would do that. It was very thoughtful of you

I was excited to come across a long Fred/Hermione story so I sat here and read it it straight to the end. I'm sorry to say - I wish I hadn't wasted my time.
There are so many wrong facts, you've focused on things through out the story that never come up again (ie the snitch) and then the epilogue/last chapter you decided to write was utter crap.
Sorry it's harsh but true.

Now Draco and Luna (both purebloods on Pottermore) are paired...did you even read your own first chapter where the law you wrote says, "all Pureblood women and men will be ordered by the Ministry of Magic to marry a witch or wizard of mixed or muggle born descent."? Well, did you?

I'm done reading this...if you can't even remember what you wrote between the first chapter and chapters 3 & 4 how can I respect you, as an author, enough to read this.

Next time you write...take notes on what you post so you stop contradicting yourself. You come off as flaky when you mess up little stuff like this.

Out of curiosity, how could Ron be paired with Pansy...they're both purebloods. The law wants purebloods with halfbloods, mugglebloods, and creaturebloods.

Fred is both in character and coming on a bit too strong. I thought Ron was the clueless one... Also, I'm rather saddened by how Draco is treating Luna. I know that he's an unbelievable prat, but this is a bit much, even for him. :(

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww this was so sweet. I'm sad that you wont be writing anymore but thestory has been amazing and I will probablt just keep re reading it over and over again. This has got to be my absolute favourite fanfiction because I could feel the characters emotions.

Awww... i like it

I admit k was a bit uncomfortable reading this with all the raping and all but it was a good story...

This is a good idea for a story. I have some issues. Please do your research. Luna Lovegood is NOT a mudblood. That is someone born to two muggles. A muggleborn. Luna is either a half blood or pureblood. Her father is a wizard and her mother was mentioned as being a witch. SO we KNOW at least she is not muggleborn. Second. A Time Turner When Fred and Hermione go back in time there would still be the present day them there. Also NO ONE would be able to say "It worked" as they are going back in time to a previous day no one would know on that day they planned on going back. SO it doesn't make a whole lot of sense. And as I mentioned it's a decent idea, but because of the lack of research it makes it difficult to understand.

I like the story plot and how the characters are depicted. However I think there's a huge flaw in the story. The law was passed so a pure blood must marry a muggleborn or mixed or whatever. But matching Ron with Parkinson (two purebloods), Umbridge and Charlie, and Ginny and grey back is just my correct.
Other than hermione's pairing with Fred, no one was paired properly.