So sadddd

Stupid Glorious Zero, you made me cry...
Seriously, this is just breathtakingly beautiful.

Once again, you pinned C.C. down. It was simple, it was emotional, it was beautiful. Besides some grammar errors, this was flawless. And I liked how in the end, she smiled. Lelouch was able to keep his promise after all.

I love how you portrayed C.C. here. You captured her so elegantly - the stoic and emotionless quality of her that we love so much. The way you don't made her seem like she's stuck in the middle of everything emotion and knowledge-wise, how she does not seem to understand her tears yet doesn't get snarky, clingy or overbearingly wise, made me blink in surprise and sigh like a satisfied cat at how refreshingly simple it is.

It's such a perfectly balanced piece and just as perfect in length! I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT!

That being said...

"Checkmate." She said. COMMA after 'checkmate' and uncaptialise the 's' in 'she'

she said miserably, "you made me cry." I think a full stop will work nicely in place of the comma here and capitalise the 'Y' in 'you'

That's all I can spot for now but really, this is a delight to read and I can't find the proper words to describe how much I like it. Thank you for writing such this and sharing with us.