Wow, this is pretty interesting. And I don't mind Duncan as a bitter writer, :) and I really love that Veronica just leaves to go to Logan and IDK, I can't help thinking that with just like those actions she's all like "Do whatever, I'm going home to someone that is the best for me" :). Also I just like the idea that while imperfect, Logan and Veronica are moving on and happier than Duncan ever will be.

Nice...I enjoyed reading it. Good characterizations. :)

Wow. Just wow. Perfect. I love it. I wasnt too hot on the original story. Not that it wasn't well written, but fun banter and emotions are more my style. Aka this. This was perfect. Your characters were perfect. And oh! Reinacting the story made me squeal with laughter and delight.

I loved this! It was intriguing and it made me laugh and smile. :)

I read Black Hole a while back and it is such a great story. And I really like the idea of doing a review/mystery hunt with it. And you pull it off so well.

I especially like this line: ""If it's us...that people think...that people assume we're not going to make it. That it's going to be fucked up between us forever. Goddamn epic, but not happy ever after." She trembled a little in his embrace." Very poignant.

But then again you are a pretty amazing writer.

I read this first on livejournal, but I love it and wanted to comment here. You have a gift. Don't stop writing!

Thanks for sharing the story by Afrocurl, it made this one make so much sense. Bad Duncan, bad, don't try to break up our epic LoVe! :)

I really enjoyed this...well done :-)

The Black Hole is a great fic and it was fun to see Veronica solve the mystery surrounding it.

I read this story some time ago but then I didn't read "the black hole" you have made that story the fiction written for Duncan in this story. Good job.

again, good story ;)

beautifully written might I add.