AWWW... this is actually cute
except maybe cotton and gibbs- the image of them is haunting me XD

This fic was really nice though the dialogue was more than a little ooc and didn’t really fit the style from the Pirates of the Caribbean, which distracted a bit from the plot. It worked out in the end and was a really nice story to read. Thanks for this nice one-shot and I look forward to more of your future work!

Lots of love,
Bat

Wondeful I loved it!this is what i do with my life and I have no regrets. Jokes aside, you’re very talented!

I need more of dissssss, You should add some chapters with jack and will building up a bond, and at some point will ends up being the top, and they switch places and whateva, Ad they actually fallz in wove, and like... Maybe one of em gets jealous at some point and whatever. I vote Will should get jealous cuz when they went to Tortuga the gals be flirtin with Jack

miss me with that gay shit

Pleeeeese more

That was so hot I almost died! Well written, of course, nice word flow. Very in character, I might add.

Okay, that was perfect

Sexy :D

I've never read pirates of the Caribbean fanfic before but I must say I shall be reading more.

Hmmm Will made a good bottom...
Very nice ;D

Eww Gibbs... Naked...

Fortunately Jack and Will make effective brain bleach in this situation.

Wollte dir grade nen kommentar auf englisch schreiben, da lese ich auf deinem Profil das du auch deutsch bist! :P Laut profil bist du nur wenig älter als ich (werde im März 16) und dein englisch ist ...man ich bin neidisch! :D Verrate mit dein Geheimniss!

Ach und bevor ich's vergesse. Die Story hat mir natürlich auch gefallen! :D Besonderds die Top/Bottom Diskussion!

I loved it!

this was realy good!