I really like this.

I love it! There are not enough stories like this!

So this story explores the rumors that Tsunade was Minato's Mother.

NICE!

Thanks for the read,

John

That's cute

Awesome. I remember reading this a few years back.

I really liked it. There's such a huge possibility of Tsunade actually being related to Minato (most likely his mother), and I'm extremely anxious to find out if it's true in the manga.

Cheers.

It's cute and different!

Not bad. Not bad at all.

That is also awesome. I really liked this one. It sort of gives Minato a background and half a family. It's great. Good job.

Darn...to good to be true. *sniff*

Hey Addster my love! I'm here on your review request. Sorry it took so long; I had accidentally unsubscribed from that part of the forum.

Love the writing style, but you already know that so I'll tell you why: yes it flows, but the emotions put behind it makes it very connectable for the readers. I can picture the curiosity Minato has while he stares at Tsunade.

When Minato goes home, the story flow begans to get choppy. I suggest rereading that section out loud and you'll probably see what I mean.

I find these larger words and the speech for Minato a bit too advanced for someone who is seven. Perhaps bumping up his age a bit help. If he is older than he was at the beginning, then mentioning that will help.

I like the similes about Tsunade being like a lion, but the repetitive use of the word through me off. Try using other words to describe a lion.

Another thing I noticed was that you gave great characterization on Tsanude and Minato, but none was give on any of the other characters like Jiraiya or Sarutobi. You don't need a lot for them, but just enough that the story is visual the entire was through and not just when Minato or Tsunade are being portrayed.

Over all I enjoyed this piece. I've never read a story about Minato and Tsunade so great job on introducing me to it!

Signed,

DarkSacredJewelXoX

[Founder of Critics United ]

I can't say I can find any fault in this, I'd be lying if i said that. Great job on this, I love the story! I don't get how Minato is Tsunade's son though, I just can't seem to figure out who's the dad.

I like it. Too bad its not a AU.

weird but appealling idea

This was a fun read. The free flow of the story was a good way to break the shock of the revelation to Minato.