Absolutely heartbreaking

That was so sad. And beautiful, like the one before me said. I actually had to cry really hard. I have this lovehate for stories with unrequited or unacknowledged love. Thanks for sharing.

its beautiful

Awe

Wow that is beautiful, intense, tragic, poignant, so much love, so much sorrow, so much wasted time and now too late, btw this is my favorite and only pairing that I will read.

Oh god this made me cry

Your story is just Beautiful. Emotional too. Love it.

This was absolutely incredible! It is so well written and I was drawn in right from the word go until the very end, a heartbreaking but beautiful story. Amazing job! x

unforgettable

Wow, powerfully moving! Thank you for sharing.

I don't normally read slash but this came highly recommended and I am so glad I read it.

This is such a beautiful and tragic story. It was a pleasure to read. I cannot help wonder what will become of Edward, Alice and Bella, maybe one day?

This is so sad.

I feel sorry for Bella; it seems she was never going to have the eternity with Edward that she was promised when she gave up her human life.

Alice loved someone she didn't know at all. It all seems so empty. If only Jasper had been honest, things could have been so different for all four of them.

Now, Alice is bereft and Bella is trapped in a lonely existence. Bella will be merely tolerated forever.

Omg I hate Bella!. Love this story and I cried...but again I hate Bella!

Thanks!

I've never read anything so sad but so beautiful at the same time.

Hauntingly beautiful are the only words that come to mind.

oh my gosh *tears*