Nice story. Up until the 39th chapter, i was very very happy with it. It was interesting, well written and catchy. But after that, the last two chapters gave me the feeling that you just want to be done with the story. You wrote it in a hurry and didn't give each event the length it deserved. Especially the last chapter. Anyways, great job. I enjoyed reading your work. Hope to read some more .

I download this story and I love it 3 it is sad how it ended, but really awesome :)

is the blonde haired guy Naruto?

Aaaw I wanted them to return to their world together. They didn't even say goodbye to their friends. I can't tell if it was a happy ending. So i'll just say it was a normal happy ending but not a good happy ending cause they never get to see there friends again. But its good cause they ended up together... For some reason and I don't know why I kinda sorta hoped I would find at least one lemon scene in this story, but oh well.

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo
why did u let them stay there forever?
but this story is really a great story
but really a very sad depressing ending

i loved it a lot

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooo

i loved it a lot and finally ace reached luffy :)

where the hell is ace?

i loved it a lot

i loved it a lot and hurry ace to save luffy

i loved it a lot and yay hanckoock

i loved it a lot and i hope Ace reaches luffy ASAP

his true desire is ACE!

i loved it a lot and i hope ace reaches luffy ASAP