Reviews for The Beginning of the End
Guest chapter 13 . 6/12/2017
I know this story is old, but I thought it was very good! The way that you do fight scenes are great,and the lovin is hot! Nice work! I hope you do more with this fandom.
jayswing96 chapter 13 . 12/3/2015
God I love this story! :D
Bluebell chapter 6 . 6/14/2015
Absolutely love how badass you make Leon sound during this mission lol
The characterization and character interactions are a real pleasure to read :)
ameranthus13 chapter 13 . 4/5/2015
omg I just read the first chapter yesterday night and it got me instantly hooked! I couldn't stop reading and just finished it, although I somehow felt as if Leon's personality switched from cold to snarky(full of witty sarcasm), when he was in Tricell training compound. The "love" scene totally sped up my heart, and it was good *drool*
now i'm off to read your sequel to this one, and i'm excited! .
loved this story so much and felt that the ending was good enough just in case there wasn't a sequel lol
keep up the great work!
Animalover205 chapter 13 . 8/27/2014
A very interesting story, I liked it. I hope you haven't given up on it, as I would like to see more.
Ominous Rain chapter 13 . 7/25/2014
Now I see why there is a sequel!
Ominous Rain chapter 12 . 7/25/2014
...That was hawt!
Ominous Rain chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
Leon doesn't die so easily. I'm glad they made it out though :)
Ominous Rain chapter 10 . 7/25/2014
Awww their banter is so witty :) I'm glad they blew up the door but I feel like a security system should of sounded by now.
Ominous Rain chapter 9 . 7/25/2014
Man Leon is a true badass in this!
Ominous Rain chapter 8 . 7/24/2014
They don't know Leon. He's been killing for a long time.
Ominous Rain chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
Hmm, so they have Leon as a test subject?
Ominous Rain chapter 6 . 7/24/2014
Well hopefully Leon isn't going to be killed or interrogated
Ominous Rain chapter 5 . 7/24/2014
Uh-oh, he has spilled the beans!
Ominous Rain chapter 4 . 7/24/2014
Oh noooooo
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