After the fun start with cat Loki I found the story rather disappointing. The OC exhibits major signs of Stockholm syndrome and puts up with Loki despite the his behavior qualifying as emotional and even physical abuse. Loki is an outright psycho who uses the poor girl as he pleases, yet somehow comes to believe that they are madly in love with each other.

Oh my god this needs serious editing. Every sentence or paragraph has misspellings, grammatical, punctuation errors, or missing or added words. Some sentences don’t even make sense. Edit, edit, edit, proofread before you post. Overall it’s a decent story, seemingly written by a young, inexperienced author. There’s a lot of WTFs? That doesn’t make sense. But then, it is a FanFiction, so nothing has to. Just keep writing and remember to proofread!

Loki is a cat? XDXDXDXD Oh my... i can't.. XDXDXDXD Fantastic story XDXDXD

I like this so far but it needs some proof reading. Like “He's only since slightly smashed me,”. Instead of “seen me slightly smashed” legit copy and paste, along with many others, but that one made me laugh.

i remember reading this story when you published and i remember it being good but its even better the second go- im just really pissed off that you didnt continue writing avengers stories,like dude- INFINITY WAR JUST CAME OUT and your writing style is like the tears of a million angels, i feel cheated out of some really good fiction lol

Loved this! Now I’ll say this I’ve never read through tan authors stories the way I have yours. I can usalky never read by the same author but you make every story fresh and yet so heartfelt and your characters and strong independent woman but none are the same :) Cabrera to read more!

Oh jeez that cliffhanger. You are truly evil, as bad as Loki for sure! lol I love this story despite the cruel and devious plot twists that goes on. You idea is pretty original and how you had Loki and Ellie get into each other and to this point was sweet in a weirdly obscured way. I really hope there is a follow up sequel because I want to see her and Steve become friends and Loki to get a trashing from Ellie before they get back together. I want to see what challenges and where this journey takes them. I wonder what will Loki be doing while he is away...hopefully not falling back to his despairing past. I have thoroughly enjoyed your FF. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us readers.

Thank you endlessly, this is such an intimate and lovely story. Your original character has such spark, I'm off to the next story.

Still adore this! Thank you for sharing.

"a slithering snake" don't you mean a slytherin snake? *winks*

Tom Hiddleston in a leather jacket gives me life

"Her first thought was that he was handsome, but after further consideration she deemed the word entirely unfit. This man, was like no man she had ever seen before.
His features were entirely delicate. His eyes were small, but sparkled brightly even in his sadness. The bones that shaped his cheeks were visible under his clear alabaster skin. His mouth and nose was perfectly proportioned and angled on his long face."
I don't know who you're describing Tom or Loki so I'm going with both

Now I want a Loki kitten dammit!

I can just imagine Loki in his cat form black fair green eyes so cute so fluffy thinks he's dangerous

I love Loki as a cat! And Ellie is a complex and compelling character.