Luvd it!
-Asta La Pasta!

the vampire Italian face at the end made the story ;D heh heh

XD Loved this!

Hrfjedkjf hgrje oh my goodness :) this made me wanna write a GerIta fic! this was adorable, and I loved the descriptive language in i really enjoyed reading this, it was really pleasant to read on a lazy saturday afternoon :)

Back when I was new to Hetalia, this was the first fanfic I read. Now I'm a huge fangirl, and this is still one of my favorites. Both of them are in character, and Italy's fear is really believable. Great work!

Aw, so cute! Italy would be scared of thunderstorms.

And you support the fact that Holy Rome is actually ChibiGermany too! *high-five*

To Japan: No, you will never understand Western customs. Never. You shouldn't even try. We're just that strange.

Anyway, this was quite a good fan fic. The description was excellent and the characterizations were spot-on (I totally feel like Britain now; I just said "spot-on"). One thing you might want to work on is commas; sometimes it seems like you forgot one or put one in the wrong place.

That is all.

~ Owl

it is not western customs, it is LOVE

Awwww~this is cute (-). I like how you did the ending.

Wonderful. I loved this very much. Italy's always so childish. Gotta love it. :)

It was a dark and stormy night, and Meg Murry-(explodes from cuteness) I loved this! They're both so in character, and Italy's fear of thunder is quite plausible, not to mention adorable.