Reviews for Don't Let the Sun Catch You Crying
Vivian Ruby chapter 11 . 5/15
This is my favourite romance story I have read in a long time. It's been 6 years since it updated, but I will still hold out. I'll slam that fav button. I LOVE this story so much, it really understands Luna and Twilight and Celestia. Thank u for writing this and I hope you can hammer out that final chapter some day. 3
CannibalBunny chapter 11 . 4/21
“Trust me, this story will be finished.” Biggest lie ever. It was a beautiful story, but I wish we got to see the end of it. Either way, I enjoyed reading this. It was beautifully written and every character was exact. It brought me back to when it was only season two, and times were better. Thank you for this.
Astromormy chapter 11 . 2/13/2017
Did I just read an entire MLP fic, and did I just enjoy it? Yes...Yes I did. Hmmmm, this opens up a whole new selection of fanfics to choose from...

Alongside that, I assume you stopped writing this story?
LavenderCrystalOfRoses chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
Out of the depths I cry to Celestia...
Huh. I like this, I can always appreciate slow-burn shipping. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Artikuno chapter 11 . 9/21/2015
Waaaaaaaaay too much feels

#FeelingYou
cat chapter 11 . 6/26/2015
Type your review here. just finished the story and it's really good even though it's kinda old I really need to know what happened next so please finish the story
Lightning chapter 11 . 4/11/2015
I feel like the cat story is leading to foreshadowing and such.
Enrique262 chapter 11 . 9/7/2014
Wow took me a while to finally sit down and read it, and while at first it was kinda slow, with all the castle descriptions and such, when the actual plot took off I couldn't stop reading!

So yeah, pretty fun having Twilight and Luna together once again, with the address of mortality and were their relationship could go done in a bittersweet but ultimately satisfying way, and loved the way you dispatched the rest of the mane 6 plus Spike, with the little hints of jealousy lingering from Celestia as the chapter progressed.

Also really glad to hear the next chapter is the final one, since while the story has been fun as fuck and I'm gonna miss it once it ends, it's been so long since it started that it truly deserves a closure, regardless of which (although hopefully a happy and/or bittersweet one), but there's one elephant in the room that hasn't been addressed for a long while now, more so since the story is wrapping up: Where is and what happened to captain Blazer?
AkaiKamiRyu chapter 11 . 8/6/2014
Wow! This is a great story! I love how several parts where perfectly in character.(like the baking scene and Pinkie's comment: "Tastes like magellan") I laughed so hard... Now I can't wait till the final chapter. I really really REALLY hope for a happy fuzzy ending. Good luck with your writing. Ja ne!
Paper and Stardust chapter 11 . 8/3/2014
This is an amazing story, thank you so much for writing it. This is the first fic I've ever read with a Luna/Twilight Sparkle pairing, and I'm glad I've read it. The final chapter will be great, I just know it.
cradily chapter 11 . 8/3/2014
Wow- I've been meaning to review for a while but never got around to it, so. As someone who regularly reads fanfiction, I'd have to say your writing is some of the most genuinely enjoyable I've ever come across. You characterize Luna and Twilight very realistically, and you handle their flaws and conflicts beautifully. Luna's most recent development is my favorite example of this- that Luna would come to struggle with the same faults that led to Nightmare Moon seems, when you write it especially, inevitable, and you work those faults into your text very gracefully. Not only that, but how you develop the setting around Luna and Twilight(Applejack's farm, the Royal Castle) really draws in the reader as well.
Your grammar/spelling is always consistently good, too- at times the phrasing of your sentences can be a bit awkward (not that I can talk), but considering just how wonderfully long your chapters are you're doing a marvelous job. Keep up the good work, please! I look forward to the final chapter.
FaUn-Huh chapter 11 . 7/31/2014
Oh god. Not the end so soon? Why must it be. I could read this story into the end and more.
MyLittleBigBangSwitchAtOlympus chapter 5 . 7/28/2014
doesn't twilight have a brother?
thebluninja chapter 11 . 7/27/2014
"Finally, room for them to breath." - *breathe

"Everypony turned around to find a bespectacled, her obviously normally tight bun falling apart due to her cantor, " - A bespectacled what?

"but I try to be supper excited and happy all the time," - And breakfast and lunch excited too?

"Chimmy Cherry, or Cerrychonga." - *Cherrychonga.

"She's a wonder friend, of course" - Wonder Friend sounds like a superhero name.

"it would probably become some sort of new tradition; wearing sunglasses at night." - What you did there, I see it.

" the Order of Leneighn " - Chocolate is communist?

"with enough thrust, it was possible to make even a brick fly " - And those of us in the Navy know that brick as the F-18.

You might want to insert some kind of section breaks when you switch to and from Celestia as the viewpoint character.

" it wouldn't be too polite to stare too hard at the view in front of her, Twilight tried to focus on the hallway around them instead." - Tried and failed, I bet. ;)

"Power and resolve. Both of which I have in abundance at the moment since I'm devoid of anything else." - Sounds like Luna's about to relapse back to the dark side.
NA chapter 10 . 6/16/2014
an absolutely great fanfiction, I really enjoyed reading it, even though I'm not the biggest reader, I hope to see the story continue further in the same great story telling you have done in the previous chapters of the fiction.
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