It was sooooo CUTE! the only thing i wish there was something else on that note. LOL the snoring though

Haha lolz CUTE! I can't believe that Dawn didn't actually say anything to Paul though... Except for 'Sorry'... I loved the concept and the writing was great. :)

~AmberAway彡

The note was hilarious. Even better was Fantina's singing. I can just imagine it now...and I'm cringing. Haha. Adding to Favorites

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Awesome! I just love sleeping on/off during longgg car rides! :)

Aww... Paul is just gonna have to...

DEAL WITH IT! XDDDD

LOL. Sleep is my ultimate motive and WEAPON too.

I wish I was like Dawn. I have and 18 hr car ride from home t ocollege and it SUCKS! I can sleep in the car but not for long so I am up for most of it... never had a beau to cuddle with when i was with my most recent ex we had the cosole in the middle and he was driving.. mmm. Good story :)

Ahh, I love'd the end; I wasn't expecting it :D You managed to keep Paul in perfect sync with his personality.

His little note made me laugh.

Good job!

LOL AT THE SLEEPING PILLS XDDDDD Something Paul would DEFINITELY write XD Ah, Dawn... snoring? XD

Anyway xD, AWWW When Paul and her were practically snuggling! I was like, "Paul definitely wasn't just doing that for some shut eye... that sneaky BAD BOY!" xD Gah I just love Paul xDDD

Oh and my English teacher said that in writing, we can't type things like "Gonna; gotta; wanna;'Cause" and other words like that because it's not... Correct English or something :/ Only if like the character is talking between quotations you can write it. Other than that, you can't... weird yes, but it's true. Just thought you should know O 3

Anyway, you did GREAT! Better than me :DDDD I so totally can't wait for your next fic... EEP XD Later, GATOR! :D 3

Hehe. Dawn snored XD I liked this fic because we've all been there. I remember I went on a school trip to France and we had to go on the coach and it was exactly like that. Sleep. Wake up. See what was on the TV. Groan. Go back to sleep. Hehe. I think you captured that really well :)

I like the Ikarishipping-ness of it. I like how you kept Paul in character even in the note! Keep it up!

RSx